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Thu Aug 21, 2014 5:03 am
IamTraunt says...



Thanks @Skydreamer!
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Thu Aug 21, 2014 7:43 am
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Wow, @Baesch loving Tenant's creepiness and total disrespect for everyone, including Boone's leadership! I am fascinated to see the show he puts on in front of everyone, because it will clearly be so opposite to what he really thinks of all of them. He will definitely need to risk a lot for them (or appear to risk a lot) in order to make their trust in him unquestionable. I like how he refers to them by their last names, it gives the sense of either a very disciplined military type background, or simply a reflection of his personal tendency to not get close to people.

I was unclear about a couple of things though, how is Markson aka Bella moving through the woods? Is she supported by Blake? Is she limping or being dragged? I think the phrase "pinned to Blake's side" made it unclear to me when I thought about how exactly that would look. Also I'm curious about how they got out of the hotel unnoticed, but perhaps we can leave that unclear to add to Tenant's mysterious ways. ;-)

Can I work on my post to add after Baesch's? I won't mention the mission directly, but if Dom rooms with Kinwe, I can have her be woken up by Dom getting back into bed after her forbidden swim...
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Thu Aug 21, 2014 7:47 am
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@Etherealember, I think we can post whenever we want to (two times a weeks). I'd love to read it!
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Thu Aug 21, 2014 11:06 am
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Spoiler! :
Quick character edit: His surname is 'Scott' now. 'Williams seemed far too common.

And we were discussing potential love lives, and came up with something. So, my character, Hugh will be seeing megsug's character, Izzy. Should I edit character's page or write on the pad or just leave notes on the DT?
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Thu Aug 21, 2014 11:18 am
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@Animal I think we're writing 'em up on the EtherPad ;)
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Thu Aug 21, 2014 4:49 pm
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Character: Kinwe
Appearance: Brown eyes, brownish black dreadlocks, short, wearing silver bracelet(s) with spiral designs, dark brown African skin tone
Type: Portrait with face turned to face the viewer, partly concealed by a hood. If you can do an action shot as well, have her crouching wearing textured pants in a way that shows that her skill is stealth.
Style: Realistic
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Thu Aug 21, 2014 11:13 pm
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Sonder says...



Awesome post, @DiagonalBluebird! I'll be working on Johnny's POV soon.
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Fri Aug 22, 2014 4:00 am
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I agree, awesome post but ethereal's character is Kinwe with an "n". Great post though! : )
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Fri Aug 22, 2014 7:25 am
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Yes! Got something to work with. Boone's latest post was great! I think now my first one will be much more interesting as I can throw Kinwe into a stressful situation and see how she handles it...

@Skydreamer @DiagonalBluebird, I can work with Boone's mispronunciation, as this is perfectly normal in the life of someone with an unusual name ;-)
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I'm so sorry about that @etherealember ! Thanks for understanding! And thanks for all the compliments ya'll!
  





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Fri Aug 22, 2014 6:14 pm
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Could I be the technical engineer or mastermind? I'll have my character up either today or tomorrow, depending on your answer :D
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Sat Aug 23, 2014 1:19 am
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Ciblio says...



Loving all the posts so far!
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



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Sat Aug 23, 2014 6:08 am
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Hey guys, hope you're all doing well in your real and WDTO lives hehe (esp Bella, get well soon :-P)

I'd like to bring up another logistical issue - finances. How are they all fed and needs met as individuals and as a group? Through Father (forgot-his-name)? Through anonymous donors?

I know that Kinwe is a college dropout who has been "finding herself" since dropping out. So she may occasionally ask her parents for money (in desperate times - diabetes related issues perhaps), but she is trying to think of ways to earn her own way in the long run. She figures she has time to think about it while being under the care of the Caths. Perhaps she can learn new skills in future missions out of necessity, and this gives her a better idea of what career she can pursue afterwards. If there is a life after Caths...

Anyway, something to think about for each of your specific characters, and for @DiagonalBluebird to clarify about the main funding of the Caths?
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Sat Aug 23, 2014 7:39 am
Animal says...



Instead of living in basement, can't some people live double lives? As in, they can go to college or have some job.
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