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You know what guys, I have a lot more free time than expected and A pretty good idea of how Riley could get her symptoms. Riley might be rehearsing with SWF and suddenly gets symptoms of one f her "episodes" she stops mid-song to try and catch a breath and then passes out and falls off the stage, and wakes up in the nurse's office.
Let me just catch up a little bit on posts then I'll try to write. (Because I'm totally addicted to this storybook.)

Hey, @TheFantasy14! I'm working on Cole's post and I wanted to run something by you.

I was thinking that maybe the guitar player in Riley's band breaks his hand and Cole offers to take over until the original player is able to come back. I was thinking Cole would show her how good he was and she would reluctantly agree... But of course it's totally up to you.

With what you were just saying, Cole could leave part of the way through rehearsal and not be there when she has her episode, or I could incorporate that into my post by having him there... Or my post could take place a day before her episode and he could have nothing to do with it, even if he is there. What do you think?

If you'd rather me not, just let me know. I can have Cole hang out with another character.

It sounds like a fun idea, especially because to Riley, "Journal Thief" Is a title worthy of federal offense.

It's up to you weather you want to incorporate him being there when she passes out or not, but if you did feel like it, it would lead to Cole asking questions, right? The other band members would know about her condition to a small extent, but maybe he'd want more information and start pelting Riley with questions?

I'll work on Michael's post and post it... tomorrow or Tuesday?

Sure, that would work, @TheFantasy14. Thanks for your input.

@Stegosaurus Awesome! Looking forward to it.

@LeftyWriter do you want me to wait for you to post?

@TheFantasy14 I just need to proofread my post. Should be up in 5 minutes or so. I didn't end up having time to post the part with Riley's symptoms, just the part where she decides to let him in the band temporarily.

Okay, posted! Let me know if you'd like me to change anything or if anything I had Riley say/do was out of character. Thanks!

@LeftyWriter Oh my goodness, that banana part is hilarious. XD

Aaaaand posted. @TheFantasy14 I hope I didn't butcher Riley's character too much.

Omg that was so cute! @Chaser

Ugh, @Chaser, I don't think I've told you but I adore your writing. :3

@Nightcrawler @HazelGrace16 Thanks! Neon's really fun to write for.

That was epic, Chaser!

Awesome! Loved it!