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Mon Jun 12, 2017 6:00 am
LordZeus says...



Hey nice post @NympheaLily. Just one thing, Mickey's team is taking a train not a bus, from Raleigh to DC directly. It's Ray's team on the bus. Also, Mia is in Ray's team.

If you could just make those corrections, that'd be great. Thanks!
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 2:19 pm
Europa says...



I posted! Sorry its so long.
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 2:26 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



Which group should Caroline go with? She'll still be able to help with nightmares even from long distances but it's more of the calming aura and the ability to make monsters fall asleep if she touches them that I'm thinking of skill wise.
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 2:31 pm
Europa says...



@HazelGrace16 I think she's with Mickey's group.
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 3:21 pm
NympheaLily says...



Okay @LordZeus the edits have been made
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Mon Jun 12, 2017 4:06 pm
Midnightmoon says...



I made my post. Sorry if my character leads to dramatic a life.

I mentioned Mia, Olivia and Ray in my post.
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 4:12 pm
Europa says...



Edited my post to fit Nymph's better if you guys want to give it a read
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 4:56 pm
Midnightmoon says...



@LordZeus and @Europa and @Lupa22, If you don't like my post, let me know and I'll change it. :)
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 5:36 pm
LordZeus says...



Hey guys, do you mind holding off on posting until I do now? Please, I have some explanation involved in mine regarding their journey as well as some other stuff. Please, I'll post in the next 24 hours.

Hey @Midnightmoon, nice post, but could you please change Alex's death? If he was killed it would mean our group has earned the enmity of the rebels which would be against what they were trying to do. So if you could just change it to, say, she threw her knife and he turned into mist, blowing away on the breeze (meaning he escaped) that would be best.
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 6:06 pm
Europa says...



Let me remind you guys though that Olivia hasn't killed that hellhound. It's still running around out there.
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 6:17 pm
erilea says...



This is going good so far! I can't wait. I might post soon if I have time. :)
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Mon Jun 12, 2017 6:41 pm
LordZeus says...



@Lupa22 please read my earlier dt post. Working on a post right now to catch up, will have it up within 24 hours (from when I sent that dt post).

Also @Europa thanks for the reminder will take care of it in my post.
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 7:56 pm
Midnightmoon says...



Edited my post.
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 8:14 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



Do you want the two groups to communicate through Caroline and dreams so they can't be tracked as easily?? @Europa @LordZeus
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Mon Jun 12, 2017 8:17 pm
Midnightmoon says...



If anyone has a problem with my character, let me know and I'll try to fix it. :)
  








Edna began to feel like one who awakens gradually out of a dream, a delicious, grotesque, impossible dream, to feel again the realities pressing into her soul.
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