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Thu May 05, 2016 4:12 am
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Basil says...



Oh my gosh @Savvy that was ... your post is so beautiful! I love both of them!! I want to cry but I'm at school so I can't D: But wow!!
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Thu May 05, 2016 11:29 am
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passenger says...



@Basil Aw, thank you so much!

@CandyWizard Awesome! ;)
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Sat May 07, 2016 12:42 pm
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Basil says...



@CandyWizard I love your post, it really cracked me up!! I just have two things I'd like to correct. First one is Saph has lost her memory so she'd have no idea who Mark is, especially when she doesn't even know how she got on the island. Second thing, the horse is a she.

Also, the horse is supposed to be brown and white patched, but black seems to suit her more ^^
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Sat May 07, 2016 1:54 pm
Persistence says...



Okay, thanks, @Basil! I'll fix those things straight away ^^

I'm not really in tune with the story yet, but Savvy did her best to make sure it was just the horse and the Saph thing I got wrong.

I actually did the Saph thing as a potentially comedic moment, since everyone expects her to not remember anything. But I see how that influences the story, so I'll change it right now ^^
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Sat May 07, 2016 2:07 pm
Persistence says...



I changed it ( :
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Sat May 07, 2016 6:56 pm
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passenger says...



Who's posting next? ^^
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Sat May 07, 2016 11:12 pm
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Basil says...



I can try to get a post up but I'll need a bit of help, Savvy. Maybe. I'll PM you if that's okay?
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Sat May 07, 2016 11:30 pm
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@Basil sure thing!
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Sun May 08, 2016 12:10 am
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Vellichor says...



@Savvy Wow I'm behind. That post was so incredible! I pride myself on not being easily effected, but that legit brought some tears and a lump to my throat.
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Mon May 09, 2016 2:17 am
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fictionfanatic says...



Will post tomorrow!
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Mon May 09, 2016 2:23 pm
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Ciblio says...



Fuck Carlisle. I'd be mad if I got farted on, too.
also heyooo
sunburnt kaylee is back with no phone
(i went canoeing with bff + guy-friend-person, canoe tipped over, we lost the majority of our things-- including my phone)
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



previously:
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Thu May 12, 2016 12:18 am
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I'll try to get a post up for Lou this weekend. I'll wait to do one for Chris until a few more people post
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Thu May 12, 2016 4:18 am
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Ciblio says...



I'm working on posts right now, sorry I'm so slow! :/
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



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Thu May 12, 2016 11:39 am
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@Ciblio I LOVED IT (as usual)

I need to get to work on my posts lol. if I still don't have posts up by this weekend, just go ahead and kick me until I get it done.
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Sat May 14, 2016 12:57 am
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SO UM

After much deliberation, I caved and made Ro an official character. I know, 3 characters is so much and I'm an idiot. I have no time as it is. But I JUST COULDN'T RESIST.

So, 'tas been done

(Though, I intend to make my posts for Ro extremely short. Like, a few paragraphs or so.)
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