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Tue Oct 09, 2012 1:42 pm
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Redfang18 says...



Noelle, Zan's a girl.
Look down and show some mercy if you can.
Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.

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Tue Oct 09, 2012 3:26 pm
Noelle says...



Oops. I thought I got everyone right. -_- I'll go back and change it.
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Tue Oct 09, 2012 11:05 pm
KingLucifer says...



Thank you for catching that RF, I probably will have never seen it until like a day or two later.
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Tue Oct 09, 2012 11:28 pm
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Redfang18 says...



No problem. I spot 'em while they're still fresh. The name clicked and the gender popped up. It's easy to miss at first, but after a slower look over ya catch it.
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Wed Oct 10, 2012 11:00 am
Caesar says...



So at this point, will I post, or shall you take things, MM?
vulgus vult decipi, ergo decipiatur


  





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Wed Oct 10, 2012 6:13 pm
KingLucifer says...



I'll post next, from what Eru is saying he or she wants to take on Zan so yea.
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Wed Oct 10, 2012 6:27 pm
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Caesar says...



Very well. And then, I'll post.
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Thu Oct 11, 2012 5:32 pm
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Caesar says...



I apologize for the double-post.

However, I'm confused. Where we're at, judging from what I understand, Alice and Aquila have mysteriously disappeared from the door's entrance, and, training has been dismissed.

...what now, I ask?
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Thu Oct 11, 2012 5:43 pm
Redfang18 says...



Use your head. Work with the post in front of you.
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Thu Oct 11, 2012 6:15 pm
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Caesar says...



*facepalm*

Gee, I'd love to, but, based on the posts before that disrupt the continuity of events.

So, o leader, in stead of telling me to 'use my head,' pray act a leader and provide an explanation/answer, yeah?
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Thu Oct 11, 2012 6:20 pm
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Redfang18 says...



Work your way around it. It happens lots of times. Just work around the problem and there's your solution.
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Thu Oct 11, 2012 6:29 pm
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Caesar says...



Very well, very well. I give. Work I shall.
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Thu Oct 11, 2012 7:54 pm
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KingLucifer says...



Trust me, I haven't liked how this SB is turning out myself so far, but try to bring Alice back in maybe just as Zan meets with Reia.
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Thu Oct 11, 2012 8:25 pm
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Xaxas96 says...



Checkin in for updates
This is our routine. Day and night, all we do is survive; it never lets up. He tells me how these streets were crowded with people just going about their lives.. must've been nice.~Ellie
  





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Thu Oct 11, 2012 11:19 pm
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Eru says...



Sorry guys, I changed it a little so Zan gets one more round before running off to meet Reia
  








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