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Sun Oct 09, 2011 8:07 pm
PrincessOfDarkness says...



I did say that, but no one got it. :S:D
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Sun Oct 09, 2011 9:23 pm
Daisuki says...



Dang, Princess! You're bringing us all together! :) This is gonna get intense O_O
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Sun Oct 09, 2011 9:57 pm
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Wait... So the government people Pricess mentioned were Cam and the others? Oh! I totally get it now. :)
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Sun Oct 09, 2011 10:01 pm
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Wait... So the government people Pricess mentioned were Cam and the others? Oh! I totally get it now. :)
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Sun Oct 09, 2011 10:52 pm
*singerofthenight* says...



Basically what we have so far Dreamer is:

Three gov people have kidnapped me and Atlia. S'ire S'oul and Quicksilver are at the house along with Fox. Im blind by the way XD And im also pissed.
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Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:09 am
MisunderstoodDreamer says...



Thanks singer! Does anyone think they could bring me in? If not, that's okay!
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Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:17 am
Daisuki says...



Hey, Apple! Just wanted to put a little note it here - S'oul took off after Xandi because S'oul is about as close to animal you can be while still remaining at least partly human, so she was attracted to Xandi like any other creature. And when Sire passed out it was from fatigue - it's not serious and he'll be up in a few seconds. Just needed to share that information.

Dreamer - Hmm... You're Devlin, right? And he has telepathy? Hmm... where do you want to go? Do you like any of the characters in particularly or have a plot you'd like to follow? I'd say jumped in anywhere, as long as you make it clear where you are and what you're doing.

Oh, and Icebender... I'm a little confused as to your post. The government kept on driving, you sent a signal. Who saw it? Do you want us to grab a car and rescue you? That'd be cool, actually...

-Dai
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Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:21 am
MisunderstoodDreamer says...



Thanks. Boy, this thing is moving fast! I'll try to catch up before a bunch of people post again. Thanks Daisuki!
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Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:25 am
icebender28 says...



Daisuki, umm, I honestly didn't know. Apple said that she saw Atila, and Princess said that she saw a car, and I was dying to post. So, I thought I would post that. You guys don't have to come after them, let her be a little disappointed. Whatever you want! So, if you guys want to go after her in a car and have a little chase, go right ahead! :D
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Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:29 am
Daisuki says...



I felt like Xandi was going to rescue you, seeing as she saw the car and smiled and then followed. So Sire and S'oul are meeting her now, and I guess we'll find out what happens!

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Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:35 am
Audy says...



I am so confused as to what is going on o-o Are we chasing after S'oul? Or are we driving on towards the government facility? I'd try to piece it together and post something but I don't have the time so it'll have to wait for tomorrow.
  





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Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:39 am
Daisuki says...



This is what I've gathered (correct me if I miss something): You government people and your two prisoners drove by Zeke's house, where QuickSilver spotted you and told everyone to run, just to be safe (I think). Xandi was up on the cliff, looking at the government car and seeming like she wanted to follow it and... (I'm not sure what she wants to do). S'oul chased after Xandi and Sire chased after S'oul (this is through the forest, heading towards Xandi and the wolf descending from the cliff). Atila (in the Gov. car) sent a help! message by letting a strand of her bright red hair hang out the window and hope that the Rebels see it and attempt a rescue.

Did I miss anything or get something wrong?
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Mon Oct 10, 2011 1:26 am
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Okay, I am just so confused. How many groups are the characters divided into. And what are they?!
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Mon Oct 10, 2011 3:51 pm
Audy says...



Ok, finally caught up! Looks like things are getting exciting! I'm loving how you guys are bringing everyone together - and icebender, I'm loving that idea about the strand of hair!

Also thanks Daisuki for the summary :) It definitely helped me orient myself as I was reading the posts I missed.

Misunderstood: Do you mean groups as in government/rebellion? Or just where people are?
There's my character Wesley, subjectblue's Samuel, and gleek's Camille who are part of the government (we're the only three in the government actually) inside a moving car escorting the rebels: icebender's Atila and singerofthenight's Mishta.

The car is heading for the government facility where Dreaming's Estelle had just escaped from.

However, along the way, it passed by redfang's Zeke's house, where Daisuki's Sire & S'oul and Princessofdarkness' Quicksilver were hiding. When they saw the car, Sire & S'oul took off to the woods where she's about to meet Apple's Xandi, who also saw the car.

^ Hope that this, along with Daisuki's marvelous post helps orient everyone.

Also, singerofthenight:
To avoid double-posting, I want to respond to this right now:
"I can see your pain, the scars that you try so hard to hide..." she trailed off and sat back into the seat.


Wesley has several weaknesses -
As far as weaknesses in his powers - the fact that while he can go very fast - he cannot stay moving so quickly for a long period of time. Wesley's strategy in one-on-one battle would be to apprehend the opponent as quick as possible - because if the battle is prolonged, he gets weaker and weaker.

Also, icebender did a pretty nice job. Stopping Wesley from moving in general will prevent him from doing anything xD Though catching him will be tough.

Now, as far as emotional weakness and the scars which you spoke of. Originally, I gave him his whole "weakness for children" as something I can use for him to sympathize with the rebels somewhat. But, as the storyboard went on, I started thinking... Wesley doesn't remember anything about his life before he was captured. Maybe the government repressed his memories, or his own psyche did that to him because it was too horrible an event to try to bring himself to remember.

I figure that the reason he values children so much is because either he had a younger brother - blown to smithereens in front of his eyes OR he had a son himself and doesn't remember any of this.

I'm kind of partial to him having a son, except that would mean I'd have to kill off a wife too - and make it so that he's relatively new to the government, rather than been with the government since he was 12 (though him being inexperienced might explain better why he's sucking so badly - haha!).

I feel it would be an interesting twist if Mishta knows this and Wesley does not, (reminds me of Oedipus and the blind prophet Tiresias xD ) what do you think? :)

And at large, what do you guys think is more believable? A brother or a son?

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Mon Oct 10, 2011 5:29 pm
*singerofthenight* says...



@ Audy: I LOVE it XD Kind of what I was shooting for (:
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