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Pierpoint Academy for Agents in Training DT



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Sat Nov 14, 2015 4:13 pm
Europa says...



Also, @Gravity if you wanted to introduce your Character, now would be the time, were all just introducing them anyway, Willow is the only one who hasn't made an appearance yet.
  





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Sat Nov 14, 2015 4:15 pm
Gravity says...



Yes, writing a post right now, actually.
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Sat Nov 14, 2015 4:37 pm
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I actually planned to have Copperhead make his helmet later, just before the mutiny... it's not too big of a deal, though.
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Sat Nov 14, 2015 4:44 pm
Gravity says...



@Chaser, it's cool, I'll write it out. Thanks for letting me know!!!
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Sat Nov 14, 2015 5:36 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



@TheFantasy14 Could we do a post where Cass could fight a shark in combat class or something? That way Evangeline could see and try to recruit her. The only reason it would catch her eye too is if it was one of Eva's best members. I suggest this as a storyline that could connect the non sharks with the sharks. Plus it could also be a come back moment for Cass.
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Sat Nov 14, 2015 5:39 pm
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Yeah, that's a good idea @HazelGrace16
  





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Sat Nov 14, 2015 5:55 pm
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Going off what Hazel said, maybe another thing that would have our characters interact more (As well as create a conflict with Crow) Is if the rebels attacked Pierpoint. Maybe they bomb it or something and these guys are the only ones who survive. It could be a little bit after the final tests have started, so the kids might not be at the school when it's bombed. They could be out in some other terrain fighting for their lives and whatnot.
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Sat Nov 14, 2015 6:03 pm
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@Gravity, Xander would HATE Evangeline. Just...HATE her.
Hate to the max.

Is it okay if Crow sort of hangs around him?

He's got a survival plan for attending Pierpoint and one of the things is not to get caught alone. Crow usually blends into the largest group ha can find, and sticks with a small group of people he deems trustworthy (i.e Cass and possibly Xander)
When he would otherwise be alone and vulnerable to a Shark attack. (Hehehe. Pun.)

In case you hadn't guessed by now, Xander has been accepted.
  





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Sat Nov 14, 2015 6:12 pm
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@TheFantasy14

Yeah sure, that's fine. I was also thinking that maybe Wil could be in a non shark group as well because she's not as hungry for blood as the others are
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Sat Nov 14, 2015 6:19 pm
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@Gravity

I like that. Corw would be kind of hesitant to have her grace him with her presence, though. At first at least.
  





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Sat Nov 14, 2015 6:34 pm
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understood @TheFantasy14 but we could develop it in the story. I was thinking maybe Eva and Wil could be sort of allies later on. Like Eva could show Wil how to use butterfly swords and could teach her the basics of combat without knives (martial arts) and then Eva could should Wil how to throw knives.

And I think William and Wil could train in martial arts together @Ghost I'm sorry, I can change Wil's name if you want so William and Wil don't sound so similar and get mixed up. Actually yeah, I'm gonna change it.
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Sat Nov 14, 2015 6:36 pm
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@Gravity

Xander sounds cool, and we could do a late night crossbow post with them. Like one night one of them finds the other practicing
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Sat Nov 14, 2015 6:45 pm
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@HazelGrace

does Cassia use a crossbow or a bow and arrow? There is a difference. Xander uses both
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Sat Nov 14, 2015 6:47 pm
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and I changed Willow to Aria, Ari for short. @TheFantasy14 @TheForgottenKing
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Sat Nov 14, 2015 7:55 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



Uses both. She is well trained in all forms of shooting no matter the weapon. @Gravity
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Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
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