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Reign of Darkness



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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:33 am
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"rolls eyes"
read your previous post...believe me i'm a MASTER at arguing I should know...xD
  





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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:33 am
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actually we are really just Q&Aing each other
  





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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:35 am
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NEGOTIATING!

*lunges at boltageman and starts a pretty good fight...*
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:38 am
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Q&AING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:39 am
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yeah "q&aing each other"
mkay "nods head"
sureeeee *looks sarcastically at boltageman"
&&
forever? yeeppp totes negotiating...

anyways...figure it outt...and if u need and help ask.
because i like you both but now you guys are just getting on my nerves.
it's seriosuly annyoing and i'm super close to virtually punching you two in the face.
just saying. =] ;)
  





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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:40 am
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Trust me, I would win a legal debate... if it were over who got more icecream. If it's something like politics, I don't bother.... GGAH!! I'm going off topic! So anyways...

Have we decided how this is going to work out? Everyone post their stuff over again, I think it was?

And yes, Forever, your negotiating. Your right. I should know by now, this was so peaceful compared to the fights I'VE seen/done. Negotiating. No hard feelings?
Religion without science is lame; science without religion is blind.

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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:41 am
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or Q&Aing. But what's the difference?
Religion without science is lame; science without religion is blind.

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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:42 am
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i would rather spend my time arguing over who's hotter taylor lautner or robert pattioson...btw taylor lautner all the way for me! =]



forever: Oh please don't start it over! I was actually having fun!
This storybook actually amused me more than others!
I actually clicked on it first when I got an e-mail.
It was something exciting to look forward to!
i like it how it is!
Please don't!

Peace, Love and Desperate Pleas,
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Wait!
(You forgot a neutral)

And if I can use some of the posts from this storybook I might be more partial to your idea.
I worked hard to write this stuff. (ugh!)

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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 9:59 pm Post subject:

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I don't think we'll really change it too much, just clear things up. The problem was that one person wrote

Pluto walked outside to get Mickeys paper and got permanently stuck in gum.

Then another person would write

Mickey gave Pluto a scratch on the head for bringing him the paper, then got up and fed him

Then I would write

Wait, what happened to the gum?

Okay, forget the last part, but you get what I mean. So what would happen would be I or all of us would gather up what everyone went with, scratch out the extra, and put it on the new forum. This IS what you were thinking, right, boltageman? If not, then I'm changing my vote to no!! Haha!

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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 10:03 pm Post subject:

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yeah, i was just thinking that, to start over with the same idea, then we just either start from where we did in the beginning or copy and paste stuff from the last so it all makes sense, or something along the lines of that.


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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 10:03 pm Post subject:

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And I guess everyone can use the stuff they wrote, but they can't use the background story, the idea of shadows, or anything else that isn't their original work. This story is based on my idea, but you still own what you wrote. If you changed things around a little to exclude any Reign of Darkness stuff, then filled in the blanks with your stuff, then sure. You can keep your work and call it your own.


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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 10:05 pm Post subject:

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Not like you contributed much either...

But this is supposed to be like a story. You can't just have action 24/7. That makes it extremely boring. I tried to make it read like a real book might.

Arguing with another character all the while is no better than flirting with a character all the while.

And I contributed to the plot.

Thank you very much!

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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 10:11 pm Post subject:

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yeah sorry bout that i actually miss read what you said and thought you were saying something about how important yours were,and i tried to contribute but everyone ignored mine or sense it was so confusing that it made no sense, because i was using another's post for it.


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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 10:13 pm Post subject:

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Which post were you reading?
And what do you say about our situation?
The storybook is 6 pages! We may as well start over from SCRATCH!

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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 10:18 pm Post subject:

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no i kind of fast read the one where you said wait there is no neutral, and i thought it said something difference.


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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 10:18 pm Post subject:

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Oh, and how are we ever going to coordinate all of this?

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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 10:22 pm Post subject:

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well we say to all the writers come to the new story location, then we say that we are starting the book over, all characters are still there so just start off from the beginning, then someone starts it off and then someone responds based off that one then so on and so forth and it should work as well as other story books do.


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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 10:24 pm Post subject:

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Yes, but if people want to use their pre-posts they will have to do them in order. That could get very confusing.
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:43 am
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Just Dance, You never had to get involved... :wink:

And you're completely correct Boltageman. That code will probably bring down the male race.
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:44 am
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seriosuly!
all that up there ^
that's how muh i post in a DAY!
God...both of you seriosuly...
"shakes head"
&& i thought i was dramatic...

this is actually kinda funny in a very stupid wayyy...
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:46 am
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ohhh...tha hurt bad "rolls eyes"
i'm not the one who spent a complete waste of time arguing over something pointless =]
not trying to fighttt...
but ehhh...yeah i did stick my head in this fight...
cause i think everyone's getting a bit annoyed. =]
don;t make me diss you..it'll hurt...
haha jk...=]
  





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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:48 am
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*Being restrained by Just Dance*

I'll get you later boltageman! lol.

Yeah, it is pretty much pointless. Oh well...
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:50 am
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haha...

geez! i have an idea!
call me crazyyy, but why don;t we just take a vote!?
by gollys! i'm so smart, i thought of such a hard solution to come up with!

this site cracks me uppp...xD
  





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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:53 am
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*Rolls eyes*

Yes yes, you got us back on track *pats JustDance on back*. Nice work, let's drop it and move on. That's 'how I roll', so to speak. Black-private message each other, I don't care!

Okay, (sigh) back to topic all... I guess... but we were just getting to the good part of the fight!! Hee hee!

So anyway, tell me, is THIS how it was decided things would happen:

Botlageman alerts everyone of the move.
We move.
Skip profiling, skip claims, skip all the pointless junk that belongs on this thread.
Everyone re-posts in a order that works.

Or do we start over and make things more realistic, like taking place over the period of a week or so?
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:55 am
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So, you're implying that this thread is pointless though we have done some very important NEGOTIATING within it?
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