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May OS: Alice in Wonderland DT



What should be done with Lucia Pennybaggs?

She should stay a PC, with someone taking over her role.
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40%
She should be made a NPC, but will still be a key player in the SB.
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30%
She should be made a NPC, but only have a minor role.
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30%
She should be made a NPC, but be written out someway or the other.
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She should be removed before even entering the SB.
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No votes
 
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Sat May 09, 2015 10:33 pm
KingLucifer says...



I think Lucia is the only exception out of the combinations provided, mostly because she keeps the Monopoly Man a secret and doesn't reveal herself as him.
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Sun May 10, 2015 3:32 pm
BrumalHunter says...



I just read Lucia's character profile, and her type seems rather straight-forward, actually: Agent Mastermind.

The Charlatans are generally very charismatic, but also very weak-willed - Lucia doesn't strike me as either of those. Besides, the Agent Mastermind is the one who A, you'd never expect, and B, who typically keeps their identity and agenda a secret. I don't know about you, but from what I can gather, that description fits her perfectly.
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Sun May 10, 2015 10:13 pm
KingLucifer says...



@AstralHunter, mmm good point I've changed it.
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Mon May 11, 2015 1:34 am
crossroads says...



Jack of Spades is in, with details as per our agreement :3
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Mon May 11, 2015 1:42 pm
BrumalHunter says...



Thanks, Avalon.

Aria, I am reading the character profile now.
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Mon May 11, 2015 8:19 pm
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



@pretzelsing, when I said "surprise me", I didn't say go completely against the character you reserved.
Since you reserved Mother Superior White, please note that her surname is White, and that she a convent, and thus a nun (albeit magical)
She should also be older please. And remember that her BoOp is the St.Magdelene's Orphanage and Abbey, not the Black Manor.
Please revise your profile before I can accept. (I did like her back story, though)
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Mon May 11, 2015 8:35 pm
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@pretzelsing, I must also point out that in the introductory post, @TheWanderingWizard stated that the Queen of Hearts came to Wales of her own accord and that the White Queen was the one who sent Chessie and Hatter to Wales. Also, you may or may not have done this already, but I must ask: has @QueenAnne agreed to Mother Superior White's familial relationship with the Queen of Hearts? And won't it perhaps be better if none of the Welsh people (other than Alice, of course) have been to Wonderland?
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Mon May 11, 2015 8:58 pm
crossroads says...



Oh hey, Chessy and Spade actually share a thing... but like, the other way around. If Spade's queen wasn't responsible for Chessy's situation, and his other self wasn't thinking of cats as snacks, they could be friends.
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Mon May 11, 2015 9:45 pm
KingLucifer says...



@TheWanderingWizard, If I am to guess right I believe I know where Lucia would stand with everyone in terms of the SB.
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Mon May 11, 2015 10:14 pm
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:) your way of telling is beautiful.i love your way of expressing things
  





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Mon May 11, 2015 10:37 pm
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Still waiting on that PM.
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Tue May 12, 2015 1:42 pm
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Really sorry, @ReisePiecey! I had it finished (I wrote it in Word so my parents couldn't notice I was on the internet), but my computer unexpectedly shut down (I only later realized the cable was unplugged...)
I am busy with it at this very moment so...

@Buggiedude2340, I am also busy with my reply to your PM.
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Tue May 12, 2015 2:15 pm
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@QueenAnne, I accepted your profile, just please remove the portal-creation ability (she might have had it in Wonderland, but not anymore...). As the Queen was banished at the end of original tale, none of her followers stayed loyal to her. (except the Jack of Spades of course)
Thus, she does have other allies (like the Fox), but they were made after her banishment.
How did she, Jack and Fox get into our world then? Well, the Queen (after she found the scepter), also discovered a magic door (not the door of Entrance {the small one}, but the door of Escape). However, she required the Fox's help to open the door.
Unfortunately for her, the door closed just as she, Jack, Fox and four other followers (you can decide who these are) made it through, leaving her other followers still in Wonderland.
As this door is in the Eldergleam Mansion, the Queen just needs to find the key to open it and get more allies into our world.
Hatter, Chessy and Gingie were teleported here by the White Queen (who is still in Wonderland, naturally...)
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Tue May 12, 2015 10:10 pm
TheCrimsonLady says...



Lovely.

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Wed May 13, 2015 4:27 am
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