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Wed Jul 30, 2014 7:30 pm
r4p17 says...



Sure. I'm fine with that. I think I know why the emperor has to be forty...XD
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 7:39 pm
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@Kanome Your image didn't show up for some reason. So you may want to look into it. But that is alright since a picture is not required. Just make sure you can find another image that works or write a description of her. Thanks!
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 7:42 pm
Kanome says...



It just worked for me. It won't fit at the top, so please, keep it where it is.
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 7:51 pm
megsug says...



@KatyaElfant tell me if I need to change the prince's profile at all.
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 7:55 pm
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AdmiralKat says...



I think that you are good. :D @megsug
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 9:07 pm
Kelpies says...



Just so Y'all know, I'm going to be changing my character right up until the last minute XD.
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 9:10 pm
AdmiralKat says...



How so Kelpies?
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 9:11 pm
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so I was wondering, @r4p17, what kind of organization are the Shinobi in this storybook? Are they more like king's guard, their identities known in the palace, or are they the historical hired hands?
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 9:27 pm
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The Shinobi are like ninjas in the fact that they don't necessarily follow a specific lord like the Samrui do. But, these Shinobi have sworn to serve this particular emperor until he dies. (Just to let you know I just made that up). :o. I am glad you asked though. Will this affect your profile? (@Judas)
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 9:32 pm
Caesar says...



it most definitely will.

If they're like ninjas, they'll need a very good reason to follow a specific lord. If they're doing it for the $$, a conspiring noble could just offer them a boatload of money to betray him. Furthermore, they'd like their identity to remain secret, and as such probably act as palace staff.
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 9:55 pm
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I figured. But my plan was not for the Shinobi to be evil. And if they wish to remain secret the evil lord will not even know that they exist. Just try not to make them bad.
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Wed Jul 30, 2014 9:58 pm
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Caesar says...



that's not what I meant. What I meant is that there needs to be a reason for them to be tied to one lord.
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Thu Jul 31, 2014 2:10 am
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@Kelpies that is fine. I am glad you decided to improve it.
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Thu Jul 31, 2014 2:17 am
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Kelpies says...



I know r4p17, I forgot about the bold part, thanks for correcting that for me! XD.
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Thu Jul 31, 2014 2:25 am
Kanome says...



Oh geez @Kelpies and @r4p17.... you guys confused me for a second xD I didn't realize you guys are using the same profile picture.
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