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Sat Jun 21, 2014 3:48 pm
Caesar says...



completely reasonable
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 4:33 pm
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I'm making a character!
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 4:36 pm
Caesar says...



awesome, welcome!
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 5:32 pm
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Caesar says...



Vergilius' Mark is the Mark of the Fool. By speaking, he can get the desired reaction from people. For example, if he is overall acting in a friendly way, the person he is speaking to will be compelled to also act in friendly manner. If he is being threatening, the person he is threatening is more likely to feel afraid or compelled to listen to him. This effect, however, can only be achieved temporarily -- say ten minutes after he leaves the person he was being friendly to, that person will blink and wonder why he was acting in such a way. Same with the hypothetical person he was threatening. Particularly strong-willed individuals, or those who dislike him intensely, or those who know what his power is already, will be able to resist this effect with respective ease. It is located on his chest, heart-height.
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 5:46 pm
TakeThatYouFiend says...



Are the square lines straight or curved?
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?
  





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Sat Jun 21, 2014 5:49 pm
Caesar says...



that's party of the mystery of the mark ;)

jk they're straight
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:41 pm
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It says it's not accepting.. so I deleted the character I just submitted :L
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:42 pm
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D: I actually have to approve those manually
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:43 pm
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No! Oh, Sis xD Oh no.
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:46 pm
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crossroads says...



*is referred to as Sis by Bro and just got really confused*

@LittleSister - when you submit your character, the SBs creator has to approve it. As s/he does that, you'll get a PM informing you about it. Until then, the character will be in red in the sidebar, saying "awaiting approval" and visible only to you and the creator (Judas in this case).
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:47 pm
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Also, next time you're unsure about anything be sure to ask someone else before making a final decision.
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:49 pm
Caesar says...



haha chill out guys, no need to make her feel pressured or anything.

did you have the profile written in a pad or something?
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:59 pm
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I deleted it because by the time I submitted it, the name of the storybook said it was not accepting. So, no, I did not have it on a pad. But the character is still in my head, so I could probably write something better now.
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 8:01 pm
AfterTheStorm says...



I have mine written up! I'll be submitting as soon as I hop online.
"And after the storm..." ~Mumford and Sons

You can't have a rainbow without a little rain.

Got Squills?
Proverbs 31:25

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Sat Jun 21, 2014 8:01 pm
Caesar says...



it's useful to write the characters in a pad before submitting them, just in case something goes awry.

And yeah, it doesn't accept them immediately -- I have to click the approve button. That might take a while depending on whether I'm online or not, but it's there haha
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