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Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:25 pm
Audy says...



You can write about her tormenting the guards, that's always fun.
  





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Thu Oct 27, 2011 4:35 pm
Dynamo says...



I think we should have the group go off to save Atila and Mishta while QuickSilver and Colin are having their bout with Dynamo. When they realise they can't beat Dynamo they'll try to run away, and getting away him won't be an easy undertaking. By the time they manage to shake him the others could have Atila and Mishta sprung and escaping from the government facility. After all, now's the best time for them to strike now that Camile and Wesley are away from the compound.

This way everyone will have their own shot in the spotlight and we won't have to wait for anyone in order to move the story forward. What do you think?
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 7:12 pm
Daisuki says...



I like that idea!
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 7:51 pm
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Plus, it'll make more sense that they'll be able to pull the rescue off because the main power users are away from the compound and won't be around to hinder them. In a way, Camile's last post made it easier for us to get Atila and Mishta out of there. :P
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 9:05 pm
Audy says...



Also, TGI almost Friday. So I can finally have time to form a post D8 I've only been able to get on between classes for like 15 minutes at a time, so I haven't had the proper amount of time to think and come up with a post. But tomorrow I should have enough time. ^-^; Sorry for those waiting on me.

But that idea sounds good to me ^ :)
  





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Fri Oct 28, 2011 6:31 pm
Shinrai says...



hmmm... I feel like Colin would not be fighting Dynamo seeing as one he just left the base and is not sure where he wants to go and two probably would not warm up to the rebels that quickly after just being deceived by his own mother.
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Fri Oct 28, 2011 6:56 pm
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Well they would be fighting him so much as they would be running away from him for their lives. I was just thinking that if Colin and QuickSilver shared a common threat, i.e. Dynamo, Colin would be more open to going back to the rebels with QuickSilver just for the sake of getting away from Dynamo. After that, he could decide just as easily to get away from the rebels anyway.
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Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:14 pm
*singerofthenight* says...



I reeeallllly hate to do this to you guys and I realllly LOVE this story book, but I have to resign ): I just don't have the energy or time to do it anymore. Sorrryyy...somebody is welcome to take over my character if they want! Feel free to her (:
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Mon Oct 31, 2011 11:56 pm
icebender28 says...



NOOO! I'm gonna miss you! You hardly got to write at all! It's so depressing...But, if you can't do it, I guess I'll write with you later! :D I hope your life gets less hectic! :D Bye!
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Tue Nov 01, 2011 12:07 am
Shinrai says...



our storybook has been rather quiet
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Tue Nov 01, 2011 4:11 am
Dynamo says...



Yes, someone needs to post something if nothing else than to kick start the storybook again. I'd do it myself, but I already posted recently.
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Tue Nov 01, 2011 9:52 am
SubjectBlue says...



I'll post tonight, okay?
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Tue Nov 01, 2011 8:11 pm
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Yay! by the way I love the name Subject Blue!
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Wed Nov 02, 2011 6:00 pm
icebender28 says...



I would post but my characters stuck. Thanks Blue! :D
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Wed Nov 02, 2011 6:04 pm
Daisuki says...



I posted recently but for the sake of the story, may I post again?

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