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Wed Oct 19, 2011 1:30 am
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Redfang18 says...



Third person's a good practice for me.
Look down and show some mercy if you can.
Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.

~~~Les Miserables
  





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Thu Oct 20, 2011 9:23 pm
Daisuki says...



Get all yer profile up so we can start this thing!

We're starting off with the Autumn Festival... details soon. And we're all writing third person, right? I know we all get attatched to our own characters, but if everyone reads the others' profile and has a good view of their nature, then I think the story would flow a lot better if we could focus on the main picture instead of just our characters. In fact, why don't we set a goal of writing for another person's character at least once per post? I don't mean making them do anything big, just go talk to them and have them talk back. Or if we're fighting together, have them use one of their attacks. Try to make all the characters work together instead of making yours the hero. Won't this be fun? ^_^
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Thu Oct 20, 2011 11:02 pm
Redfang18 says...



You're the boss, boss.
Look down and show some mercy if you can.
Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.

~~~Les Miserables
  





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Thu Oct 20, 2011 11:08 pm
Daisuki says...



:P Sorry I'm a little impatient. Patience, Blaze, patience!
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Thu Oct 20, 2011 11:48 pm
Shinrai says...



Third person writing = More difficult
Shinrai (Japanese) means reliance, faith, trust, and confidence which are things that I hold value in and I strive to be reliable, faithful to God and the people I'm around, trustworthy, and confident so if you were wondering what my name means I hope this explains everything
  





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Thu Oct 20, 2011 11:51 pm
Redfang18 says...



I'm writing third person in another storybook. Third person's a good practice, once you know what to write.
Look down and show some mercy if you can.
Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.

~~~Les Miserables
  





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Fri Oct 21, 2011 12:01 am
Shinrai says...



Any tips and tricks?
Shinrai (Japanese) means reliance, faith, trust, and confidence which are things that I hold value in and I strive to be reliable, faithful to God and the people I'm around, trustworthy, and confident so if you were wondering what my name means I hope this explains everything
  





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Fri Oct 21, 2011 2:47 pm
*coco says...



Third person is fine with me :)
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
  





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Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:22 pm
Redfang18 says...



Is it OK if we claim more than one character?
Look down and show some mercy if you can.
Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.

~~~Les Miserables
  





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Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:44 pm
Daisuki says...



Yup! I was thinking up to two main ones, but since Fairy Tail has so many characters, I think it'd be cool to create some short profiles on the DT for reaccuring extras, sorta of.

And ya know how Fairy Tail has archs that sometimes focus a little on a character? We should take turns doing that, where if an arch is about your character, they can feel a little more free with the hero, I'm-ultra-super-strong stuff. Am I making any sense?

We'll start as soon as I get a reply from wizkid.
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Sat Oct 29, 2011 1:27 am
Daisuki says...



Wizbid says they'll jump in later. We're starting! Some thinngs to remember to make this the best it can be:
- Third person!
- Don't be possesive over your character (I know maybe I can I definately do this sometimes...)
- In order not to trigger someone's fury, read the character's profile thoroughly before writing about them.
- Include other characters
- Tell me off if I'm being too bossy...
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Sat Oct 29, 2011 3:33 pm
Redfang18 says...



Ring ring! Ring ring! Wizkid's dropped out!
Look down and show some mercy if you can.
Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.

~~~Les Miserables
  





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Wed Nov 02, 2011 8:05 pm
Daisuki says...



Ready, set, -GO!
Sorry it's so long, just had to start strong!
Tell me if I portrayed your characters wrong. I read their profiles a couple times to be sure, but if there's anything you want me to change, I'll be happy to.
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Wed Nov 02, 2011 8:46 pm
*coco says...



I just posted. It's not much, but I really hope it's okay :?
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
  





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Wed Nov 02, 2011 11:14 pm
Shinrai says...



I posted too. I'm not sure I like this third person. I always think of things in first person and it's kind of hard to translate over sometimes.
Shinrai (Japanese) means reliance, faith, trust, and confidence which are things that I hold value in and I strive to be reliable, faithful to God and the people I'm around, trustworthy, and confident so if you were wondering what my name means I hope this explains everything
  








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