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Reign of Darkness



Start the story over

Yes
4
80%
No
1
20%
 
Total votes : 5


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Tue Feb 03, 2009 3:50 am
Threnody says...



Wait!
(You forgot a neutral)

And if I can use some of the posts from this storybook I might be more partial to your idea.
I worked hard to write this stuff. (ugh!)

Peace, Love and Desperate Pleas,
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 3:59 am
TexanWriter says...



I don't think we'll really change it too much, just clear things up. The problem was that one person wrote

Pluto walked outside to get Mickeys paper and got permanently stuck in gum.

Then another person would write

Mickey gave Pluto a scratch on the head for bringing him the paper, then got up and fed him

Then I would write

Wait, what happened to the gum?

Okay, forget the last part, but you get what I mean. So what would happen would be I or all of us would gather up what everyone went with, scratch out the extra, and put it on the new forum. This IS what you were thinking, right, boltageman? If not, then I'm changing my vote to no!! Haha!

-Tex
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:03 am
Bloo says...



yeah, i was just thinking that, to start over with the same idea, then we just either start from where we did in the beginning or copy and paste stuff from the last so it all makes sense, or something along the lines of that.
  





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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:03 am
TexanWriter says...



And I guess everyone can use the stuff they wrote, but they can't use the background story, the idea of shadows, or anything else that isn't their original work. This story is based on my idea, but you still own what you wrote. If you changed things around a little to exclude any Reign of Darkness stuff, then filled in the blanks with your stuff, then sure. You can keep your work and call it your own.
Religion without science is lame; science without religion is blind.

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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:05 am
Threnody says...



Not like you contributed much either... :smt110

But this is supposed to be like a story. You can't just have action 24/7. That makes it extremely boring. I tried to make it read like a real book might.

Arguing with another character all the while is no better than flirting with a character all the while.

And I contributed to the plot.

Thank you very much!
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:11 am
Bloo says...



yeah sorry bout that i actually miss read what you said and thought you were saying something about how important yours were,and i tried to contribute but everyone ignored mine or sense it was so confusing that it made no sense, because i was using another's post for it.
  





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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:13 am
Threnody says...



Which post were you reading? :roll:
And what do you say about our situation?
The storybook is 6 pages! We may as well start over from SCRATCH!

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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:18 am
Bloo says...



no i kind of fast read the one where you said wait there is no neutral, and i thought it said something difference.
  





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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:18 am
Threnody says...



Oh, and how are we ever going to coordinate all of this?

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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:22 am
Bloo says...



well we say to all the writers come to the new story location, then we say that we are starting the book over, all characters are still there so just start off from the beginning, then someone starts it off and then someone responds based off that one then so on and so forth and it should work as well as other story books do.
  





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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:24 am
Threnody says...



Yes, but if people want to use their pre-posts they will have to do them in order. That could get very confusing.
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:26 am
TexanWriter says...



Or you two can stop fighting and I can copy and paste (and spell check) all the frikin' work. I was going to ask if I said something wrong, but this seems like there's a simple solution. I'll ask to put stuff in a more correct order, and I'll alert people when stuff makes no sense with the story whatsoever. Let me know what you think.


*mumbles something about fighting like a pack of wolves over a rabbit carcass*
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:27 am
JustDance says...



^
yeahh..we just need to fx a few things && e should be good to go!
  





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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:28 am
Threnody says...



We're not fighting, we're negotiating!

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*mumbles about someone trying in vain to break up a argument between two very argumentative people*
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:32 am
JustDance says...



"rolls eyes"
read your previous post...believe me i'm a MASTER at arguing I should know...xD
  








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