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Sun Aug 10, 2014 8:53 pm
Blackwood says...



Reference pics make me depressed because I can never find them.
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Sun Aug 10, 2014 8:58 pm
r4p17 says...



What are reference pics?
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Sun Aug 10, 2014 9:20 pm
Caesar says...



Blackwood wrote:Reference pics make me depressed because I can never find them.


quote on quote
vulgus vult decipi, ergo decipiatur


  





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Sun Aug 10, 2014 10:35 pm
Auxiira says...



@Blackwood, I just realised that if the team ever have to go to Tabs' house, Jensen's going to be bounced out like a ball. So many demon repelling spells on her house.
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Sun Aug 10, 2014 11:32 pm
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Auxiira wrote:@Blackwood, I just realised that if the team ever have to go to Tabs' house, Jensen's going to be bounced out like a ball. So many demon repelling spells on her house.


He will have to be making all sorts of excuses then.
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Sun Aug 10, 2014 11:58 pm
Shadowlight says...



Question... who is tab? I don't see a profile.. is this happening on a pad somewhere?


Also @Lumi I do have a ref pic for Demhara.
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Mon Aug 11, 2014 8:49 am
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@Shadowlight, Tabs is my char, and her profile was just accepted
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Mon Aug 11, 2014 12:41 pm
Lumi says...



we're almost ready to start~!

the only ones we're waiting on are @DiskElemental and @dragonthief1

unfortunately, i don't know either of them well, so they may never show up again. who knows?
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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Mon Aug 11, 2014 5:11 pm
r4p17 says...



What exactly is the plot, @Lumi? I am not quite sure what demons have to do with agents? And what exactly are the demons like?
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Mon Aug 11, 2014 5:16 pm
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i'm not pre-plotting this SB so that i can have relaxed fun writing it with the rest of you.

demons come to the earth in human form to screw around with the natural balance of things and feed off of human anguish. it gives them power, allows them to do greater and more horrific things, etc.

our agents are related to the demons because it's their job to hunt them down. that's what they're agents of.

i didn't really think that needed explaining. >.>

as far as the beginning plot goes, the SB thread proper has the first mission posted in the anchor post.

i guess it's also worth noting that i have all intentions of this being a comic action story. hence no angsty teenagers or broody wallflowers who don't have any motivation. each character has a standard of personality to live up to, and if they don't, i'll do some one-on-one writing counseling with the driver of said character.
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Mon Aug 11, 2014 7:21 pm
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I understand you want this to be a Comic SB in it's main elements @Lumi Does this mean to the exclusion of dramatic character moments as well? such as tragic? OR just dramatic in any sense of the word?

Also what is the rating for this SB? I can EASILY see my character being rather... ahem....adult. xD


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Mon Aug 11, 2014 7:37 pm
Lumi says...



oh, there'll be drama. xD i don't know how better to put it, but it's just my preferred style of narrative: a comic surface with the depth delivered in small, painful doses.

and yeah. xD R is fine. most of my 'books end up R anyway.
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Mon Aug 11, 2014 7:51 pm
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I would prefer not to be in a SB with R content, @Lumi. I am not saying I am quitting, but I think that as a general rule most SB's should be kept PG-13 whenever possible.
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Mon Aug 11, 2014 8:53 pm
Lumi says...



feel free to leave if you're uncomfortable. i know the storybook forum rules. that said, i'm not going to dampen the good time the rest of us can have for a squiggly conviction.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
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-Shinji Moon


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Mon Aug 11, 2014 8:59 pm
r4p17 says...



Okay. I'm sorry to leave, but I don't want to violate my conscience. But I hope this storybook does well! :) What do you want me to do with my character btw?
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