Hey. The kidnapping is finally here. Hazel and I have agreed on the details. Basically, Astral's coming back. We've already seen his "thief in the night" tactics, so we're going with something a bit more overblown this time. Like, insanely overblown. The first step would be to have the characters leave the island. While I think that Tybalt could eventually get them off, I was kind of hoping that Matthew could come and pick them up. It'd bring him up to speed before Astral swipes Scar. Since he's travelling with characters that we don't really like, that makes them perfectly expendable to Astral's madness. As they're travelling away from the island, I think the false sense of security could allow Astral to make a striking return. Seeing him disregard strategy and attack them directly is the direction I want to take his character in. He could just swoop in on a modified Frisky (because that's how he survived the mountains) and blow something up before anyone can react, kidnapping Scarlette for nefarious purposes.
Thoughts?
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I love that your using my nickname. @Chaser it sounds like a really good idea, but what about Kirsten? how will she find out that Scar's been kidnapped?
Astral invades a military super carrier? I like @Chaser and actually the two NPC's who will make up Matts team aren't expendable. Break them a little toss 'em around just don't kill them
I could post with Leon meeting up with Kirsten and Zandra and Kevin. @Lau2001, I've never written a character that had a little voice in his head before. Am I doing okay with it? Any pointers?
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