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Tue Sep 06, 2011 6:55 am
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Yes, Basically, Tarasel is an Idealist- he killed out of the belief he would be a ruler for the better, and if he discovers it isn't so easy- it'll cause him to descend slowly into darker and darker ways- giving you the villain.
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Tue Sep 06, 2011 6:59 am
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ScarlettFire says...



Yup. So, he's going to win, but obviously something goes wrong. *won't say what yet*
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Tue Sep 06, 2011 7:58 pm
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So Queenie is posted. She even ended her speech with a little guilt trip. ;)

Oh hey quick idea. I was thinking Lynx and Mrs. Assassin could go kidnap the temple maidens. Since they said they heard something or whatever. I was thinking some crime boss could want them for something, and was going to have Lynx do it - for a lot of money of course. And then they found out that Ulta was betrayed so they rescued her to use her to help them with the Temple, because she knows the layout and all that. Any ideas? Comments? Concerns?
  





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Wed Sep 07, 2011 3:27 pm
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Wed Sep 07, 2011 3:41 pm
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Miss. Assassin thank you very much ;) And deffinatly, I like the idea and it would be an ideal way for Ulta to get back at the Temple. If we do/write it while she is still injured could make it interesting. She could be taking refugee in the Temple with Lynx as a 'carer' then at night they sneak out? Just putting ideas out there. Also it could explain the knocking, or just be a commoner since no-one is meant to know about the hide out. However I would like to interact with Demoness' characters before we set out properly.
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Thu Sep 08, 2011 11:23 pm
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Holy... I go to bed, get up and go to work, come home and a lot has happened :). I will get on a post right away...
  





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Fri Sep 09, 2011 9:17 am
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Demoness, I think you're confused. Keira and Aodán aren't in the temple. They're in Ulta's hideout. :\

Guys, please remember to read where someone's character is. If you don't, it can get very confusing.
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Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:22 pm
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ScarlettFire, are you going to kill the mage or Isranda or both? I was just curious because if Ulta, Lynx, Keira and Aodán (maybe) go to the Temple for Ulta's revenge and DSF's idea of kidnaping Temple Maidens for a crime boss, Ulta will want to kill Isranda.
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Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:29 pm
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I'm not entirely sure yet. I've been waiting on Synn for an Amar/Soren post. We have plotting to do. But you can go ahead and have Ulta & Co. make a move on the Temple. (Besides, I am planning on killing Isranda eventually...just....not yet.)
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Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:32 pm
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Kidnapping temple maidens? I think Aly just started crying *pets her little character*
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Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:33 pm
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Yes, we're going to be evil and kidnap Aly and Aisha, most likely. Probably a few others, too. I'm not sure yet. Waiting on Synn and a few others.
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Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:46 pm
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Aww bless, poor Aly. How about if I make Cara into an actual character rather than just someone who gets mentioned? Just an idea. DSF, in your next post do want to voice the idea of Ulta's way of repaying Lynx? Unless you've thoguht of anything else, for the record I really like the crime lord idea though... :wink:
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Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:01 pm
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I may be a bit forgetful- but can anyone remind me where is Tarasel standing?
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Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:16 pm
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Uh. Did he ever leave the Council chamber?
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Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:32 pm
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Shadowlight says...



DFS- Hector is back in the palace right now, do we want some mother son bonding?

Also!
Demoness, you stated some interesting stuff in your last post about Hector and Keira and I LOVED it! I wanted to know if you had any ideas for their meeting again, do you have something you really want to do? I'd love to hear them! :)
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