“Hey, Kass, what’s up?” I asked as we crossed to the towering red door of the high school, pushing it with all my might and heading down long hall.
“I was only guessing, Kass!” I only rolled my eyes before turning to continue our sedate plod down the hall. I hadn’t noticed the sea of students flowing around us,
“Thanks, Kass,” I sighed.
“Kass!”
“Kass…”
It irks me how often you are using the narrator's best friend's name at the end of almost everything she tells her.
The story is also very dragged out and boring. If you were to cut it much shorter and stop over-elaborating on everything it has the potential to be a whole lot better.
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