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The Twelve Muses



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Sun Mar 31, 2024 8:12 pm
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Twelve poems for the twelve Greek Gods.


Goals:
  • Comment on others threads, encourage!
  • 16 poems, but I may aim for 20 (or 30 if I'm bold enough)
  • Write to the best of my ability
  • Add visuals/images to each poem

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Sun Mar 31, 2024 8:15 pm
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AmayaStatham says...



Greek Mythology in Poetry, that's interesting. I hope you're doing a poem(s) related to Daughter of War too. No pressure ^^ I'll be back to check out your poems, all the best @Leya !
  





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Sun Mar 31, 2024 8:23 pm
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Oooh! That's a great idea! @AmayaStatham, I may throw a couple poems for that in and make it 15 poems instead of twelve!
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OOH Greek mythology poetry !!! super cool :D You got this, Ley!! >:D
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Spoiler! :
This looks awesome, Leya!!
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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Mon Apr 01, 2024 4:25 am
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1.
The Invisible King

Zeus

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What is a king, without his throne?
He is merely a whisper,
a thought,
a bolt of lightning,
in the ever misty skies.

How could he feel alone,
when everyone bows to him?
All he sees are ghosts of
what he could be,
not what he is.

And now he sits here, lost
and afraid.
The king of all Gods,
yet what does he conquer?

Is it the land beneath Hades' boots,
or the skies that belong to his son?
No,
it can't be.

So what does he conquer?
Instead he rules over their minds,
yet to be discovered,
and they all,
obey.

"Obey," he says,
and they follow
because he (sounds) strong,
not because he (is).
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Mon Apr 01, 2024 8:06 pm
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Omg, Ley!! This is amazing. The ending stanza is chef’s kiss. The use of parentheses to change the meaning is a really cool technique ^^
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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Mon Apr 01, 2024 8:24 pm
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Spoiler! :
omggg thank you :3
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Tue Apr 02, 2024 3:21 pm
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2.

Queen of Judgement

Hera


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a woman of (pride),
but sorrow is steady,
a land far and wide,
yet the girl is not ready.

a sheltered omen,
of gods and divine,
a land of men,
the (oppressed design).

her throne wiped clean,
by no other than him,
the loyalist queen,
but her heart strings (thin).

in the shadows she's tucked away,
nothing but skin and bone,
to sentence them to 'stay',
or to (never) return home.
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Thornton Wilder, Our Town

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Tue Apr 02, 2024 3:42 pm
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Hera's came out great! ^^
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Spoiler! :
Ahh, thank you :3 wanted to try out rhyming. @RavenAkuma
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Tue Apr 02, 2024 5:49 pm
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Spearmint says...



Spoiler! :
this line!! "but her heart strings (thin)." amazing :D i loved the rhyming-- it made it fun to sound out Hera's poem in my head! the colors and images are also lovelyyy. awesome start to NaPo, Ley!! ^-^
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Tue Apr 02, 2024 5:52 pm
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Spoiler! :
<333
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Tue Apr 02, 2024 5:59 pm
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Rose says...



Spoiler! :
This theme is epic!! I love the Greek Mythology poems, even more now I'm reading DoW :D. 'till now, Hera's poem is my favourite, the amount of chills packed within its lines is just amazing!!
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