Greek Mythology in Poetry, that's interesting. I hope you're doing a poem(s) related to Daughter of War too. No pressure ^^ I'll be back to check out your poems, all the best @Leya !
“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni “Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter “ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
Omg, Ley!! This is amazing. The ending stanza is chef’s kiss. The use of parentheses to change the meaning is a really cool technique ^^
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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni “Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter “ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
this line!! "but her heart strings (thin)." amazing i loved the rhyming-- it made it fun to sound out Hera's poem in my head! the colors and images are also lovelyyy. awesome start to NaPo, Ley!! ^-^
This theme is epic!! I love the Greek Mythology poems, even more now I'm reading DoW . 'till now, Hera's poem is my favourite, the amount of chills packed within its lines is just amazing!!
"What is a poet? An unhappy person who hides deep anguish in his heart, but whose lips are so formed that when the sigh and cry pass through them, it sounds like lovely music." — Søren Kierkegaard, Philosopher & Theologian
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