Greek Mythology in Poetry, that's interesting. I hope you're doing a poem(s) related to Daughter of War too. No pressure ^^ I'll be back to check out your poems, all the best @Leya !
“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni “Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter “ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
Omg, Ley!! This is amazing. The ending stanza is chef’s kiss. The use of parentheses to change the meaning is a really cool technique ^^
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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni “Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter “ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
this line!! "but her heart strings (thin)." amazing i loved the rhyming-- it made it fun to sound out Hera's poem in my head! the colors and images are also lovelyyy. awesome start to NaPo, Ley!! ^-^
This theme is epic!! I love the Greek Mythology poems, even more now I'm reading DoW . 'till now, Hera's poem is my favourite, the amount of chills packed within its lines is just amazing!!
Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did. So throw off the bowlines, sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. — Mark Twain
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