Thanks a lot Wist! I've been trying out a lot of new styles of poetry, so when I saw the beautfiul poem you'd written and link to the prose one in your thread I decided to try it out. ^^ I'm glad you like it.
NaPo is the best time to try new styles. I hope you find more you like!!
She/They/Fae
“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni “Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter “ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
Omgg. This hits hard, Amaya!! Favorite lines have to be the ending. It just shows someone sick and tired of hearing the same lies.
She/They/Fae
“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni “Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter “ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
I finally got the chance to read some poetry and I quickly found your thread, it's so amazing Amaya you are going great! The quick snappy lines of the initial poems, I really liked the style of "A Glowing Candle Fades" The way of structuring it where two poems collide together was very creative. "Amazing Girlfriends Can Fail" was really cute and special, the conversation with the prince.
here is the deepest secret nobody knows
(here is the root of the root
and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky
of a treee called life; which grows higher than the soul can home
or mind can hide)
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart
(i carry it in my heart) — e.e. cummings
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