I love the imagery in your April 22nd poem! The idea of being able to help yourself but rejecting that help is really interesting, and I especially liked the line "the stiches are right in front of me". Keep up the great work!
-- "And I love the thought of being with you, or maybe it's the thought of not being so alone." ♡
i bled so much for you that there is nothing in my veins. so with fragile hands, i fill them with tears and pain for it's all i have left - now my lungs breathe sadness my body moves on sadness (my heart pumps sadness)
i rip blades of grass from the earth and flowers from their home. i uproot trees and tear handfuls of young stars away from the sky, because if i can't grow then nothing can.
the melody of the cello echoes around the empty room, filling the abyss of darkness and lost dreams with a sense of hope, giving a reason for light to stream in from the two rain-stained windows
Wow, you're poems are coming along really well, Star! The imagery in each poem is fantastic. I especially liked the April 12th and 23rd ones - they've got a very chilling feel to them. Also, I love how your latest poem has a sliver of hope in it. <3 Really well done!
unwind me; undo the threads that keep my body together rip the seams of my heart and let everything pour out - the blood in my veins, sorry’s kept locked away, all the flowers that couldn’t bloom, and the darkness that hides in my corners. let it all spill out, and tell me if you still want to stay.
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