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Audy's Awkward Adventures [2014]



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Mon Mar 31, 2014 3:14 am
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30/30

Last year, I had a theme. This year I'm just totally free falling.

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1. (a haiku)
The cliffside weeping
for its empty seagull nest
reminds me of mom.

1.1 (and a haikai)
Restless energy
chases my pensive moment
out the dogtrap door

first the weeping, then the stress
until I'm lonely again,

and doggie returns
leaving his muddy pawprints
around my sad scorn.
  





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Sat Apr 05, 2014 1:55 pm
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2

Pollen wells up in your eyes and births streams
breaking through the dirt and grime of skin
where tufts of daffodils grow, one for all
your idealized dreams.

Under the shade of pines
you're making love to these
trees, enough to have you sneeze.
  





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3

Det regner trollkjerringer,
but we'll get back to that. First lemme remind you
we were young saplings once
growing up the tropical way,
roots intermangled, trunks up and twisted
and a canopied head that caught all the rain because you have such a thick
skull, you know?

the world cuts you up, not because of your fault lines
but because you're rich with birdsong
where every day is a story,
your guava, my apple
your tiger, my horse.

Sometimes there's a shame in your cry,
and no end to the rain.
My folks and I, we say like:
its raining trollwitches,

and I see you and I'll agree
that you need to let them out.
  





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Sat Apr 05, 2014 2:36 pm
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4 Moby

The tongue of the sea is salty, and not of the fleshy way
of long collected sediments,
but of a churning fire hungry in the deep.

In this way,
I have the sea in my guts and veins
I have this lightening storm strike of a heart beat ambition
the onward raging stroke of a swimmer,
we kick arms and legs and breath and head.

Not every girl aspires to the chase of whales,
but when we do, we make waves.
  





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5

somebody be a dear and remind the doctor:
his stethoscope belongs to me now.

as sure as he dare place
some cold metal disc to my heart
and call it listening, we cannot go on.

i have this pound of sag and flap and cellulite
but to me what's unhealthy is how the forks and knives
clink out more conversation than what we do in a fortnight.
  





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Tue Apr 08, 2014 7:38 pm
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6

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Your bagpipes appear to be dummied up in these cattle lands,
and we scarcely hear your noise anymore.

All is too quiet here, and before we suspect
the opiates, the cottonseeds, the dust
it all tumbles and flowers
and penetrates through to the cracks of your skin.


We exist
as felons.

We're flooding everything down our path,
drowning it
asphyxiating it, dropping the hammer
where nothing bubbles back.

Israel's laws have long disappeared in these parts,
and macaroni-mustacchioed men now gather
with panty-loved breaths and each wanders to himself,
how far up does this ladder go?
they're fat on Swiss,
but X-ray those wreckers long enough
and you'll see it.

It is small and it is hidden deep
and it still marches back to
the sound of your bagpipes,

you've only got to play.
  





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Tue Apr 08, 2014 7:39 pm
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7 Sushi Rolls

you've fed me in sushi rolls
and I don't know, I suppose there's
something about packed rice
and raw fish, and the cold of it rolled up as an art
bouquet of flowers

sometimes your oiled eyes seized up
too quickly to flames, and butter-flaked skin
dissolved away,
all was sharp, hard bones
where those chopsticks plucked away
gradual-like
until the sake clouds up and reflects not my face, but the
smoked up motions of these feelings.

I think I dreamed about this once
there was a way you said your words,
slurred and slippery as an eel
and that electrifying swish of a tail slap in the eyes

when I found out:
sushi means 'sour-tasting'
and hungry,
we fed upon these all our years.
  





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8

a boy by the well wears sandals made of elephant ears
and seashells,

so that he feels big when he walks with his bucket
so that he can hear the ocean in his ear as he drops down his bucket
and imagine herds trumpeting with glee as he hauls it back up again

his water is the sweet crisp of mountain song
and scarce,
but he can go thousands of miles and more
by sandal legs.

I guess I fall in love with the foreign,
the way that it feels and sounds and story tells something new
but not.
  





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The last one is especially gorgeous - it's that kind of perfect simplicity where it says nothing and everything. I want 9 and 10.
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~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

The light shines brightest in the darkest places.
  





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Sat Apr 12, 2014 5:11 pm
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^ TY :)

For now here's #9 for Madness.


& here comes the day:
soft, from the scent of talcum,
bruised, from the drear of dawn—

by the wake of whispers
overturned bottles click at my touch,
like jewels I can rattle them off:
carboplatin, etoposide
vinorelbine.

those moments
before swallowing,
I can feel how there's more and more air
that flows within my veins
& I get preoccupied now with how my body
floats,
how it drifts almost out of ways—

by then I cannot stop myself,
there's not an anchor left.
  





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12. Cantaloupes

I am not sure why they call them that;
perhaps for its bounding trellis, wild as a gale breathes
and swells her life inside these wombs
I cannot see anything to them but giant pots

perhaps for its melon melodies, cantos canterbury
orange balladries,

it is a basket weaver
that shell of yours
a maze runner, fat and artistic

or perhaps
it is my plump stomach weighing me down
  





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13. [moments]

The wine flows tonight and up flies the corks, and suddenly
we're a throng of jubilant faces fevered in dance, spangled
in sweat and love and drink; there is jazz in our eyes
youth in our veins where my skin burns of glow, and there,
in a quiet nook, a red moon streaks in and bathes us sweet
in its nectar and I'm a locust
dipped in its amber
stuck between immovable and unstoppable.

I see our future,
how in a hundred years when you've uncovered my body
found me petrified in stone and froze and alone you will see this part of me here gone by the moment, but still hanging on to the skirts
of your eyes, grasped in every blink,
braced in every dream.

It shall feed us long after the candle blows,
after the last glass is served and they on their wayward footsteps go,
this moment will rebuild us long after the beauty fails,
and the bats roost inside the caves of our heads.
  








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