"Granny Vase has been taken by the Alder King, and hidden somewhere in Fae, a world of magic. Will the creatures of the Alderlands help or hinder Ben?".
@AGWilliams and @wildwildcat - I shall get to them as soon as I can, but with school and tennis it may take a while, also considering that they are both fairly long O_O I shall do my best and I hope my review will help ^_^
I was wondering If you could review a story I'm working on. I have about half a chapter done with my book "October." Here's the summary.
The story is about a man named Benjamin T. Waite he is one of a few survivors in a post-apocalyptic world where demons have dominated Planet Earth. His wife Jolene or "Jo" died in a devastating airplane accident on their way back home from their honey moon before the whole apocalypse started. He went back home shortly after to his hometown of New Orleans, LA. After returning home strange things started happening; people went missing, strange ritual sacrifices are found in cemeteries, abandoned warehouses, and houses, strange demonic symbols tagged in alleyways... etc.
I want to know your thoughts of the plot and I might need a little help on grammar, I'm not sure. I also would know any advice you may have on keeping the story interesting.
Hi! I'd really appreciate it if you could my first chapter of Removing The Mask! It's about a girl who writes a book and gets it published at 15. She has a double identity with it though and lives two lives. Her mum is fame obsessed and drives her to get her name everywhere. I'm not very good at writing descriptions on the spot. If you check out the description on the story, you'll have a better idea.
I've have loads of reviews on mistakes I've made in punctuation and I'd really appreciate it if you could let me know about the characters and description plot ect ect more than my mistakes. (I know they are there I just can't see them. Main reason is because I'm dyslexic.)
@SarcasticMockery - Sure thing! To be honest your description sounds interesting and I can't wait to read. So plot, characters, description, no grammar ^_^ I'll get on that asap.
Hola! Could you review this for me, please? It would be much appreciated. ... and the Water Whispers Words It's a short narrative about - um. A girl who. Um. Can't write. Very well. To be honest... I just need to know if it bores you. However, I would really love an honest, general review as well. I need a critique. Thank you.
Hey guys, looking for a review on my newest and best piece 'One night in London....'. Will do reviews in return, no bother. Hope ye like it The Shauzer
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