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Thu Mar 29, 2012 7:43 am
Threnody says...



Hello and welcome to Forever Threnody's Review Distribution Center. We have been on an extended hiatus but we're back and better than ever. We guarantee everyone and anyone who writes

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with genres of

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to feel welcome and confident in submitting their work.

Here at Forever Threnody's Review Distribution Center, we like to focus in on every piece that passes through our hands and we take pride in our attention to detail. We enjoy helping you to improve your writing so we keep sugar-coating to a minimum and stick clear and straight to the point.

Trust in Forever Threnody's Review Distribution Center, the freshest name in literary critiques in the YWS community, to give you the review you need! Just post a link and we'll get started as soon as we can!
Last edited by Threnody on Wed Apr 25, 2012 1:41 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Thu Mar 29, 2012 10:47 pm
theboss says...



Could you please look at my Greek myth rewrite?
I'm doing a project on the stories behind the constellations.
work.php?id=94320

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Fri Mar 30, 2012 2:08 am
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Your review is finished. :)
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Mon Apr 09, 2012 11:40 am
Sins says...



Hey there, Threnody. :)

Would you mind reviewing the first chapter of a novel of mine? It's general/dramatic fiction.

work.php?id=94544

Please and thank you!
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Sun Apr 22, 2012 2:42 pm
Jas says...



Hey Threnody,

work.php?id=94862

A review on that would be greatly appreciated. :]
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but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:09 am
Ikerot says...



Hail, friend!
I just finished rewriting the prologue, so here it is!

work.php?id=94631

It's quite lengthy and it's only part one of it (since I'm splitting it into 4 parts).
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Wed Apr 25, 2012 1:40 am
Threnody says...



Hi everyone! I have been extremely busy not able to get on YWS in awhile. Please bear with me and I will try to finish the reviews as soon as I can. Thanks for your patience.
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