Hello! I was wondering if you could critique my NEWWW and improved Prologue for Keychain Magic which I have worked very hard on in updating. Thank you!
Death Cab for Cutie - Funeral For A Friend - A Day To Remember - Taking Back Sunday - Safetysuit - There For Tomorrow - OneRepublic - All American Rejects - Yellowcard - Motion City Soundtrack
hi! um could you review my story please. i shortened my first chapter into half. i don't think its a good start so i would like others review(tired of beging my younger siblings to read it.younger! they never read it) i suck at the begining please help point out what mmy problems are.thanks work.php?id=93995
if you review poetry(i forgot what you wrote on the first page) please review the one whose link is shown below.
thanks a bunch!
Do the people think that they will be left to say, "We believe" and they will not be tried? (29:2)
Hey, this looks like a cool place. Do you mind reviewing a (somewhat long) short story of mine? It's been up a super long time, but people appear to be afraid of it due to the length. Also, feel free to be as harsh as you like!
Hello! I just posted my first piece recently, and I was wondering if you'd have time to do a Quick Critique. It's just a novel I'm writing for fun, but feedback is always nice. Here it is: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=94160
I will pay with a review of my own, if you'd like. Thanks in advance!
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