I'm working on a novel, and posted my first chapter here. I want to get a lot of nitpicky reviews to help better my writing style, and saw your post. So, I'll give it a shot. xD
It basically Realistic/Fantasy, which is an odd combination, I know. It's like a Utopia/Dystopia kind of book. It's Parallel Realm:The Conjurer Wars - 1
So, anything that gets down to the little things, grammar, ways to improve ANYTHING is very, very helpful.
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