Young Writers Society

I need a review please

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It's romantic fiction.

Hey:) Hopefully, I am not getting too demanding over here
I have posted two new chapters, care to take a look?
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Thank you in advance!
Oh, and *hands a cookie*.

I will review your chapters and the one by Rascalover once my term tests finish, which will be after this Thursday.

Rascalover - Review done!

Yea I like a review over here if you don't mind. I been meaning to post up a final chapter but I would like somebody to review the chapter before.

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it's fairly simple action adventure mixed with a bit of fantasy, it should be fairly simple if you don't mind.

Polink - Both chapters reviewed.

MasterLHeart - I'll read the first chapter as well before reviewing this shall I?

Hey! You reviewed something for me previously and I used to love your reviews.
I started working on a new story, and I did put it in general fiction, however it's only because I didn't know where else to put it. It does have supernatural elements but it's not set in a different realm hence not placing it in fantasy. I would totally understand if you choose not to look at it, but if yes, I would be eternally grateful I mean, if you even do a part of it that'd be nice. Because I probably shouldn't have posted quite so much of it in one go. And this isn't even all of the first chapter... sigh.

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The project's name is Samodiva.

Stela - Review done