I will review your chapters and the one by Rascalover once my term tests finish, which will be after this Thursday.
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask." Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants." - Dragon Age
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask." Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants." - Dragon Age
Yea I like a review over here if you don't mind. I been meaning to post up a final chapter but I would like somebody to review the chapter before.
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it's fairly simple action adventure mixed with a bit of fantasy, it should be fairly simple if you don't mind.
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!
MasterLHeart - I'll read the first chapter as well before reviewing this shall I?
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask." Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants." - Dragon Age
Hey! You reviewed something for me previously and I used to love your reviews. I started working on a new story, and I did put it in general fiction, however it's only because I didn't know where else to put it. It does have supernatural elements but it's not set in a different realm hence not placing it in fantasy. I would totally understand if you choose not to look at it, but if yes, I would be eternally grateful I mean, if you even do a part of it that'd be nice. Because I probably shouldn't have posted quite so much of it in one go. And this isn't even all of the first chapter... sigh.
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask." Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants." - Dragon Age
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