hello! I've been looking through the forums and your reviews are popping up everywhere! I would love love love if you could possibly critique my poem? I'm new to YWS, but am having so much fun, already! I've always enjoyed writing poetry/short stories, but now I have a place to become a better writer and improve my prose. I'd adore some good feedback!!!
this is it
thanks!
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