Young Writers Society

I was wondering if you could please review EITHER

this: topic72242.html (poetry)
OR
this: topic71872.html (chapter of a new novel I'm working on)


I wanted to give you the option because you might not feel like reading some type of writing right now. So either one works. Or neither. It's totally up to you.
And review wise- nitpicking is fine, but I'd really love feedback on the actual quality, one whether it's good or not and how I can make it better, generally and specifically. I know. Super helpful, right?
Anywho... thank you so much.
I am indebted to you FOREVER, which is quite a long time.


-Coral-

All done!

Helloo

please could you review the first part of my novel Foretold ( and the rest if you can be bothered )
viewtopic.php?t=71645

Thats the link ^^
I know this sounds pathetic, but dont be too harsh!
xD lol

Thanks!
-Ava

Done!

Hey, Skins! Can you do this one for me?
topic72292.html

Thanks in advance. ^^

Hello agian!
Tis me agian!
Another poem topic72324.html

Thanks!

~Rain~

Skins my dear, could you review this for me?

Can you do a nit pick content and style/diction for my romantic short story. Its called "The Mixtape Diaries: Do It Like you Do It To Me".
Here is the link: topic72361.html

Thank you very much
-aestar101

If you can review my poem:
topic72321.html

Thanks.

All are done except for aestar's review... xD

I'll get to that soon! I've done half of it and I'll finish it off soon.

Will you review my poem? Thanks

topic72411.html

Done all!

I'd love an overall review on my screenplay, Freya's Replacement. Thanks

Yours is done, Nepthys!

Are those two meerkats about to go surfing? WOOOOAAAHHH!!
Anyway, please review my ch. 3 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer. Thanks
topic72554.html