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Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?



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Sun May 16, 2010 8:18 pm
Sins says...



Done :D

Next...?
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Sun May 16, 2010 9:09 pm
RedSmiles says...



Hey there!

If you'd like, I'd love to have you review my story! It's Romantic Fiction and was recently moved to novels, though I've split it up into short stories as I've posted it.

The link to the first part of chapter one is in my signature. If you like it, it is part of a novel and you could follow the first page to the remaining chapters. No pressure, though.

Thanks so much!
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Sun May 16, 2010 9:41 pm
Attolia says...



Hey :)

I'd love it if you could review this:
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Tue May 18, 2010 2:01 am
Kale says...



Would you please review Chapter 3 of The Fox and the Prince for me?
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Tue May 18, 2010 4:30 am
fight4whatisright says...



hi thanks for the reveiw it was really helpful and i tried to fix up the stuff you pointed out
could you please reveiw the next chapter?
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Tue May 18, 2010 3:00 pm
Sins says...



Yours is done RedSmiles. :)

I'll get on to the rest of them A.S.A.P! No more requests until I finish these three though, please guys. I've had loads of review request lately, including PM's. I want to make sure I can give everyone a decent review. :pirate3:

xoxo Skins
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Tue May 18, 2010 8:27 pm
Sins says...



All done guys! :pirate3:

I also reviewed your brothers story, Sionarama. Plus, it got me my fifth star. 8)

Anyone else fancy a review...?
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Wed May 19, 2010 3:16 am
Jas says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic63893.html

Hey, could you review this?
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Wed May 19, 2010 1:07 pm
Sionarama says...



hey Skins (again). This review is not for my brother (twin) or a cousin... It's for me. I'm going to be completetly selfish for a change.... :) Now this review is on the story (by me)
name: After Adonis
genre: romantic fiction (its more romance/fantasy but who cares??)

Thanks sooo much!!

CHOW FOR NOW,
sionarama

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I think I've become a regular here!! <3
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Wed May 19, 2010 5:14 pm
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'Sall done guys. 8)

I'm like a PUMA, just without the black fur, yellow eyes, paws, tail, claws, pointy ears and sharp teeth. Plus, I can't bend over and lick my- never mind.

Anyone else...?
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Sat May 22, 2010 9:16 am
MiaParamore says...



Lol.

Hi there Skins. i would love a review on the seventh chapter of my novel-A Criminal's Heart. The link to it is in my signature. Thanks in advance!

And as always, let me know when you post something or need a review!

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Sun May 23, 2010 6:21 pm
EmmaJane says...



Hi Skins!
Could you do me a massive favour and review the first chapter of my novel? Pretty please? It's called Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons. And possibly maybe the second chapter...?
Thank you so much!
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Sun May 23, 2010 9:17 pm
Sins says...



Yours is done Shubhi! I'll get to yours as soon as possible Emma!
I've had loads of requests lately, I'm trying to get to them as quickly as I can. 8)
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Mon May 24, 2010 6:21 am
darkangel_05 says...



topic64098.html
can you review this? it's just short.
Sometimes B sharp,
Never B flat,
Always B natural.

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Mon May 24, 2010 5:49 pm
Sins says...



All done!

I am now officially a free person! 8) :pirate3: :D :smt003 :smt001 8) :smt004 :mrgreen: :wink:
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