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Sun Dec 19, 2010 8:15 pm
BenFranks says...



Hullo Pink. Would you mind taking a look at this for me?

Thanks very much. (:
  





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Tue Dec 21, 2010 1:52 pm
Yuriiko says...



Daddyo!

Will you review this for me? Thank you very much in advance. :D
"Life is a poem keep it in the present tense." -Sherrel Wigal
  





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Tue Dec 21, 2010 4:55 pm
Shearwater says...



BenFranks-Done
Yuriiko- Done
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham
  





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Fri Dec 24, 2010 3:46 pm
Tigersprite says...



Have I asked for a review here before? My memory is bad. Anyway:

Can you please review this poem for me Pink? It's for a contest, so I need some feedback. Thanks in advance!

Tiger
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do."
Nathan Leopold
  





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Fri Dec 24, 2010 6:39 pm
LindseyBrooke says...



Ah, it seems like you have a lot of reviews pending right now. Whenever you get the chance, take a look at mine please?
Title: Comatose
Genre: Romantic/Fantasy

topic73696.html
Thank you! I really appreciate it. And please take your time. It honestly doesn't matter to me when you post the review. (:

-Lindsey
"Next year I'll be transferred to Pigfarts."
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Tue Dec 28, 2010 1:48 am
GenShawklan says...



Hello! :) I was wondering if you could review the first chapter of my story, When the Sand Runs Out? Thanks so much!
Last edited by GenShawklan on Tue Dec 28, 2010 2:17 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"Stop being defined by what people think of you." - Glee

"Dare to be different; if you blend in, no one will ever notice you. It's the unique ones they remember."

Please review one of my writings (preferably All I Know of Hate) and I'll return the favor! :)
  





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Tue Dec 28, 2010 2:46 am
LindseyBrooke says...



Thanks Pink for the review! I really appreciate it.
I only had a few questions for you to answer based off of your reply. Whenever you get the chance, I would love if you could answer them for me to help clarify some misunderstandings. Thanks so much!
topic73696.html
"Next year I'll be transferred to Pigfarts."
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Fri Dec 31, 2010 6:54 pm
TheAlphaBunny says...



Hello, Pink. :)
I've read some of your reviews before, so I thought it would be nice to get your opinion on my own work. I currently have only two pieces up, for either of which I'd appreciate a review. Um, both can be found directly in my portfolio. Nothin' fancy.
Much love,
Bunny
"I can have oodles of charm when I want to." --Kurt Vonnegut Jr.
  





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Fri Dec 31, 2010 10:52 pm
mizz-iceberg says...



Hello Pink!
Could you please have a look at this for me.
viewtopic.php?t=74017
Thank you very much!
I'm a godmother, that's a great thing to be, a godmother. She calls me god for short, that's cute, I taught her that.
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Fri Dec 31, 2010 11:16 pm
Shearwater says...



Tigersprite- Done
LindseyBrooke- Done
Genshawklan- Done
Thealphabunny- Done
Mizz-iceberg- Done
Last edited by Shearwater on Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:45 pm, edited 1 time in total.
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham
  





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Sat Jan 01, 2011 6:11 pm
Button says...



Hey Pink! :)

If you have some free time, would you mind please taking a look at this?
topic74039.html


Really appreciate it! Thanks! :)

-Coral-
  





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Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:15 pm
LadySpark says...



hey Shear!
I noticed I hadn't had a review from you in a while so I decieded to ask for one.

Its my new novel The magi
I'm very proud of it and would LOVE a review from you :)

novel.php?id=976

please and thank you :)
~pointe
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  





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Mon Jan 03, 2011 2:34 am
Jesiica says...



Hello :) Just wondering if you could help me out, It would be greatly appreciated.

A Glimpse of Death - General Fiction (short Story)
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Mon Jan 03, 2011 9:39 am
MiaParamore says...



Hey, Pink.

I know you're busy-no rush. Could you review this? I don't want much of it to be reviewed, just like a normal review. I kept it simple on purpose.

Know I'm Here(Prologue)

Thanks.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:38 pm
Shearwater says...



Coral- Done
Pointe2drama- Done
Jesiica- Done
Shrubbery- Done

I am now free to take up more request. ^^
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham
  








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