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Thu Nov 18, 2010 1:10 pm
Jashael says...



Review please? =))) novel.php?id=661
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Tue Dec 07, 2010 12:13 am
BondGirl007 says...



Mkay, lets do this yo! Bring it on people =D
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Mon Dec 13, 2010 11:49 pm
SilentRain says...



Hello, this is my second attemp on the Prolouge of my first novel...

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Thanks,

~Rain~
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Mon Dec 20, 2010 11:34 pm
BenFranks says...



'Ere you are, Hope. Have a butchers through this: topic73302.html ;)

I have Part 2 up as well if it turns out you enjoy it. (:
  





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Wed Jan 05, 2011 10:36 am
Perviguana says...



Haha, a view-a-holic ;D interesting. Well if you have the time you can check out "Kingdom of Rielle" in my portfolio.
Thanks lad!
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Wed Feb 02, 2011 12:23 am
Jas says...



..Is this open?

I HAVE ANOTHER DARE FOR YOUSE! Yeah, Imma jerk, Hopeh darling.

Review everything of mine, that you haven't reviewed yet. I BET YOU CAN'T DO IT.

Can't take the heat, get out of the kitchen.


xD I'm weird. What's wrong with me? Jesus. I'll just leave now

*shuffles away*

~Jassy Awesomeliek Fail.


(Btw, I was kidding but if you want to take the dare, then...I dare you?)

(Btw again, if you don't want to take the dare, then could you review this: post817207.html#p817207)

THANKS!

~Jas again. haha. I dunno. BAI!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Wed Feb 02, 2011 12:32 am
BondGirl007 says...



I. Hate. You.

But, what do I get if I can pull it off? In saaaay a week?
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Wed Feb 02, 2011 12:44 am
Jas says...



You know you love me ;D

Hmm, I dunno, you want points? Or a Facebook status dedicated to how amazing you are? Or reviews from me (My reviews suck)? Or all of them? Or two of them? Your choice, babe.

~Jas
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apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:16 pm
BondGirl007 says...



Well I'm not doing anything older than a year, and I'm going to want a freaking Hope shrine after I finish. You write way too much. xD
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Wed Feb 02, 2011 10:43 pm
Jas says...



xD Hope shrine it is!

Lol, there is no such thing as too much writing (Even if most of it is crap).

~Jas
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Fri Feb 04, 2011 2:02 am
BondGirl007 says...



Keep em comin people!
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Sun Feb 06, 2011 4:40 pm
Jas says...



YOU'SE FINISHED! :D
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 7:17 am
cannoncomplex says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post816478.html#p816478

hey, bondgirl can you look at that story for me.
And can i ask if you can review for me the effectiveness of the plot, the style of the story and the characters rather than the grammar. This may ensure that I know my strenghts and weaknesses when making a new story.

I hope you can do that :)

cheers
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Tue Feb 08, 2011 9:23 pm
BondGirl007 says...



Done!
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Tue Feb 15, 2011 8:27 pm
ScarletteRose says...



It's the first chapter of an old novel. It is Sci Fi. Don't be afraid to rip it to shreds. ;)

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