John McClane: Drop it. It's the police. Tony: You won't hurt me. John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not? Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen. John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
Hey WD, i'd love if you could review a piece of my story. What to look out for is writting on the post.
Sparrowhawk Soar (a excerpt 3/4 way through the novel) post644561.html
Thanks!
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Will you review Small Steps for me? Thanks!! <3 Link - post650953.html#p650953 Genre - Romantic Fiction It's a short story, so yeah... It's for Jared's contest, so anything specific about the tone of teh piece will be greatly appreciated. Peace, love, and chocolate, Flute Loops<3
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