asxz, you're all done! Finally, too. I might have to rethink the whole multiple-chapter critique thing, especially when I've guaranteed it all be done within three days!
Good job though.
And anit-pop, I'll be on yours immediately!
~Evi
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
Eeeeeevvvviiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!
post510563.html#510563 I know you don't like scripts, but...it's also kind of a poem? And I'm not expecting a really serious review on this. If you can do it you'll be favorite...again!
Thank yer kindly!
'life tastes sweeter when it's wrapped in poetry' -the wombats
Review my story, please? I'd appreciate it if you could especially pay attention to sentence structure, as English is not my native language.
Thank you so much ^^
Anzius, I've done the prologue, but I'm afraid I might not get to the other two parts until next week, after the Blue -vs- Purps war is over. I promise I'll still get to them, though-- if you want, because I could possibly not meet my three-day guarantee, I'll give you another critique of your choice.
Closed for the moment because of the war! Come back later!
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
Alright, people, the war is over and Evi is open again! *fanfare and confetti*
So, Anzius is done, and I'll be on asxz immediately. EDIT: asxz is done too!
I had to remove my 3-day guarantee because things are getting too hectic with my schoolwork, but still expect your review before three days! Just, I don't want to be accused of false-advertising if I don't get to it until the 4th day or whatever.
~Evi
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"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
"You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things..." — Gone With the Wind
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