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Sat Mar 28, 2009 6:38 pm
imapoemperson says...



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Thanks :D
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 8:21 pm
Lord Anzius says...



EVI!!! How did the war go? you win?

Oh and here is a request: Can you please review this?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45764.html

the Mansion ch 8 part 1
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Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:47 am
Evi says...



Finally. Done. Whew.

The real world keeps getting in the way.

Terribly inconvenient, really.

:P
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
  





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Fri Apr 03, 2009 1:32 am
imapoemperson says...



topic46134.html Thanks! :D
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Sat Apr 04, 2009 6:22 pm
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Check. ^^
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Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:32 pm
fluteluvr77 says...



Evi! Can you review this? It's for Cat and June's horror contest :
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But, it isn't too scary...So, help would be welcome...
Do you want anything reviewed in return?
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Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:39 am
Evi says...



Nothing in return is needed, Flute! Lovely job; you're done. ;)
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Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:45 am
KailaMarie says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic46341.html I'd love if you could review this for me! Thanks.
... :D ...
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Wed Apr 08, 2009 8:47 pm
Evi says...



Thanks Kaila; you're done, too. :lol:
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Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:04 pm
imapoemperson says...



I really need some reviews on this...thanks!
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Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:23 pm
Evi says...



Check, PoemPerson.
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:51 pm
anti-pop says...



Mind giving this a read, Eevee? :D

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Sun Apr 19, 2009 5:42 am
Insomnia says...



Hey, Evi. :)

My story was neglected. I can has review, please? :P

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post542707.html?highlight=#542707

It's my attempt at minimalism for Kylan's competition. That's why there's almost no description, adverbs, etc. It's closed now, but I still want a little help because I think it's off. So, if you want, brutalise.

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Sun Apr 19, 2009 6:37 am
lilymoore says...



Hey Evi, one of your awesome reviews would be...well...awesome, if your not too backed up. Thanks.

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Thu Apr 23, 2009 12:36 am
Evi says...



Poppity, Mat, and Lily are all done! ^^ Wonderful job, everyone.
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