Here's my story if you could review it and give me some feed back on it, please? What you think about it, what I could Improve on, puncuation if any etc.
And thanks!
When people ask me, why are you so weird, I never know what to say. Then I think, why should I be like this when I can be like ttthhhiiiisss?
Hey, Rasca! You reviewed Chapter One, so I was wondering if you could please review Smoke and Fire: Two?
Thanks in advance,
Tiger
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
Idea? Drop me a line! I love to research things.I do mostly nonfiction pieces such as current events, political/ethical/religious topics,and historical/scientific research.If you've a question you'd like answered or a topic about which you'd like to know more,I'll gladly write you a piece on it!
topic87552.html Your review on 3km story was really helpful. I will correct those mistakes. If you dont mind can you review the above topic too, so that I will come to know what kind of problem I have exactly ...
Hello! Could you please give me some feedback on "The New Congregation". I am looking to refine it down from its initial presentation. viewtopic.php?t=88518 Thanks in advance Oliver
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