Young Writers Society

Every ones stories have been critqued.
I hope the reviews were helpful and thanks for the request

So who is next ???

Ah, well...could you take a look at my Vicissitudes stories (romantic fiction)?

There's nine of them, and currently I feel that the ninth and seventh are the most lonely (the most in need of reviews). I suppose it'd make more sense if you read in order...really, you have review as many as you want, I'll be happy to have just one review. It doesn't matter to me.

topic37792.html (<--the link to the first one)

Thanks in advance! ^^

Any one in need of a review

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic50956.html

I'd love if you could reveiw this for me. Be as brutal as you need to be. Thanks!

what about fan-fiction? You don't have to know anything about Silent Hill. I just need my chapter 3 reviewed, also if you like it you can continue to read and review ^_^



topic50929.html -chapter 3


If you need a summary here it is.


what happen if My friends and I went to a boarding school in Silent Hill (Basicly it is hell on earth)

prologue - Crimson, Allie, Ali, and Lizzy are having an interview with a doctor in a mental hospital.

chapter 1- Crimson get's scared by a ghost, and she tells Allie, Ali and Lizzy what happened at Breakfast. Then Ali has a nightmare about Lizzy burning.

chapter 2- Allie has a dream about Lizzy burning and meets the ghost girl. Crimson, Allie and Ali talk about the dreams and how they might be a premonition. Lizzy decides to go ghost hunting.

I hope you will review chapter 3! ^_^

KailaMarie wrote:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic50956.html

I'd love if you could reveiw this for me. Be as brutal as you need to be. Thanks!

All done with your review : I hope it was helpful?

And Maki-Chan Im still working on yours but I wont be surprised if I have it up tonight or tomorrow

All done




Any one else need a review????

Yes please! I'd be grateful a review on the first chapter of a novel I'm currently working on/editing for younger readers:-

A Lost Soul (working title) - Chapter 1

Thank you

Lyrics? Yes? Pretty Please?

topic50994.html

If you don't do lyrics you don't have to.

-Carly

Reviews are all done thanks for requesting one i hope they were helpful.

So whos next?
You know you want one

So who needs a review?????

Hi!

OK, I know this might be a bit of a pain, but I've posted my fourth chapter of my story and I'm not getting reviews BUT the fourth chapter doesn't make any sense without the other three!

So, could you please pretty please, read the first three chapters and review the fourth? Take as long as you want and PM me if you don't want to do it because the chapters are a bit lengthy!

Oh! Link: topic46148.html

Afeefah

Hello you helpfully reviewed the first chapter of my story a little while a go ('A Lost Soul') and I was wondering if you would do the same for the second chapter now up? Thank you :-http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic51972.html

Here's my stories. Please give me your opinions.
topic51728.html
Also could you do the second one? It's the second one I need reviews on.
topic52175.html
Thanks

I have completed all the reviews and what not.

Anyone else need a review ???