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Sat Jul 19, 2008 12:41 pm
Blink says...



I want something to review!

*points to review counter*

Still below 5000! Get them sent in, I offer high-quality reviews, I am more proficient in the prose areas but I will take a look at other areas.

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Last edited by Blink on Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:20 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Sat Jul 19, 2008 9:37 pm
-Save-Ferris- says...



Seeing as you've had no other requests could you please review the prologue and first chapter of my sad excuse for a novel 'Magic Carpet Ride'

topic32817.html

topic33207.html

Neither are finsihed but it's always good to know how things are coming along :D

Merci beaucoup!
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Sun Jul 20, 2008 2:35 pm
Blink says...



No probs :)
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:02 pm
JFW1415 says...



*Sighs* Haha, if you insist. Actually, I'm just finishing up a very big edit - I'd love it if you'll look at that when I'm done. I'll let you know. :)

(You must be bored to stalk my guestbook for this! ;))

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Mon Jul 21, 2008 5:44 pm
Blink says...



Boredom? *shifty eyes*

Sure no problem, just say the word :)
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 6:32 pm
Jamie_rocks says...



I'm also almost done with a massive edit. I'll post the link when it's up.
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Tue Jul 22, 2008 4:58 pm
Blink says...



OK!

Come on people, all these lovely pieces of work are looking at me for a review and I don't know which to go for!
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Tue Jul 22, 2008 6:07 pm
Jamie_rocks says...



I'm back.

Okay, the link is:

topic33373.html

P.S. I give points to good reviewers
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Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:48 am
OverEasy says...



Hello :D


If you please

topic33396.html

Thanks!

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Wed Jul 23, 2008 10:24 am
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Sure :)
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Wed Jul 23, 2008 11:48 pm
Twit says...



topic29564.html

Scroll down until you get to the Gandhi quote and the chapter called "Drych-ddelwedd".

Thanks! :D
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Thu Jul 24, 2008 5:44 am
alicat159 says...



Hey, this is a story I started a while back and I wanted to know if I should drop it or continue. Please review. Just an all around review of you have time; character, plot, dialog, etc.

topic32148.html
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Thu Jul 24, 2008 6:09 am
Clo says...



I must bombard you! D:

topic33479.html

When you have time. ^_^
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Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:55 pm
BigBadBear says...



Murder & Investigation 1 - Before the Murder

Murder & Investigation 2 - Discovery of the Murder

Eh, sorry for the lame titles. The first one has like a bajallion critiques, but the last one has none. Thank you so much.

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Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:18 pm
Blink says...



I completely forgot about this thread--I will have these done before I go on holiday, thanks!
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