I shalt ask thee these questions three: Can thou review this piece, please. Can thou help me to make this piece better. And can thou review the other capters ???
To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better. -Giuseppe Verdi-
If you've got the time, I'd like it if you'd look at this. It's a longer story, to be split into parts for the viewing ease of everyone. If you don't want to review each and every part of it, I understand.
Your hesitation suggests you are trying to protect my feelings. However, since I have none, I would prefer you to be honest. An artist's growth depends upon accurate feedback. — LCDR Data
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