AHH! Thank you! I love it when people review me. So far I only have one chapter of one book out (I'm a new user) and I need people to review it while I work on the next! I really appreciate this! Anyway, here's the link: viewtopic.php?t=82202
A few more chapters to finish for Dakota but I'm going to start accepting requests again. I'm aiming to do 100 reviews this month and a nice long list might help to motivate me since I'm a little behind schedule at the moment.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Hello Kitty! Could you critique this please? post916620.html#p916620 It's a short story based on the events of 7/7. It's got many likes but only a few reviews... It's not graphic though. I didn't mention anything with blood in case you don't ... really ... like it XD I noticed your location is in England (Go Britain!) so you might know some on the topic. Thanks! - Mac
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Hey Kitty Would you kindly critique this poem (if you get the time that is) viewtopic.php?t=87718 Thanks P.s: (Just in case) If you're feeling super generous and want to go a critiquing-spree, of sorts, I've got more poems just waiting to be critiqued.
"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." - Bilbo Baggins
"I did it! I finally killed Batman! In front of a bunch of vulnerable, disabled kids!!! Now get me Santa Claus!" - Joker
When you find the time, could you please check out a fantasy prologue of mine? It's awfully rough though, so don't expect anything amazing. viewtopic.php?t=89882
My novel hasn't been touched with a barge pole...most disconcerting. I wonder if you could have a look in obvious exchange for review times of my own...or some sort of perverse effigy to a dark god of your choice. It's the only novel I have so It'll be easy to find. Tally-ho and all that.
Hi there =] I have this piece called To Lie Down With Dogs... its slightly on the explicit side, and is therefore rated 18+. I rated it that so then, if people weren't used to what I'm saying, they'd know not to read it. There's no cussing. The subject matter is about a rape victim of sorts dealing with the aftermath. If you'd rather not review it, I completely understand. Here's the link of you do =] topic89963.html
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