Young Writers Society

Kitty!, I've never had a review from you yet, It's bound to be riveting!



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I need this by this weekend if you could, It's a historical piece for my honors English class, we had to write a piece on our family's history. Don't worry i think it's under 800 words!

thank you
heather

---Jon---


*Will review some of your pieces if wanted*

Hey dear. I'd love if you could review this topic36173.html at some point.

Thanks.

Le Penguin.

I really need a critique for the next section of my book. It's called Top Secret Cobra: Half-Human (Extract 3) and it's on either the first or second page of Action/adventure fiction, unless the line-up's changed.

I'd love a crit on the story I just wrote for Jared's Message contest.

Memos of Bleeding Hearts

Thanks!

Okay, I just posted this a few days ago and it has no reviews, so please. It's the first two chapters of my supernatural novel-to-be The Love Note. It's long though, so there's no rush.

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I'd love it if you could tear this to pieces soon. Thank you.

wanna crit my poem???? :]

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Hey guys! Just to let you know my internet has been none existant the last few weeks so sorry for the delay but I'll see if I can catch up before the end of the month. The list is currently:

KJ: chapters nine and ten
Jamie: as linked above
Conrad: as linked above
Sunshine: as linked above
Pengu: chapters one to five
Via: Punch

but I might not do them in order. I think I'll probably tackle the shorter pieces first and then the longer ones. Sorry for the wait,

Heather xx

Hey, Heather! I only have one critique on this, and I really need help with it.

5 stories for Cal's Contest

-Jared

*Updated* My current list of critiques to be completed:

Jamie: as linked above
KJ: chapters nine and ten

Shifted to page four. Pffft. I'm waiting for the above pieces to be reinstated somewhere other than the advanced critiques forum. When they have been, their authors can contact me if they still wish a review but for all intents and purposes, I have an empty list.

I have a resolution to write five reviews a week. For the ease of keeping up with that, the first week doesn't end until Sunday when I go to bed (this latter part being very important as midnight would just not do) so I should be fine for the moment but I would rather not be struggling to find items to review in future weeks.

In other words, request critiques! And longer ones will occasionally be set aside until the next week if I'm short on time but you shouldn't have to wait too long.

Please!


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Done =)

Dearest darling Heather, I would LOVE one of your splendid reviews? For a poem: post489350.html#489350. Please? xD

Thanks.

-Adna

Any time my dear xx