I changed the title since I thought enjambment was already implied by saying line breaks so it would sound redundant. But yes, it still has a relation to enjambments.
@Haraya, But is it connected to the poem? By that I mean, does the message of your poem revolve around the title? Not just you indicating that it's from a prompt? I'm just making sure because this substantially affects the way I interpret your poem.
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hey! here's a chapter of a novel i'm working on!. it leans fantasy but i'm trying to weave in sci-fi elements. whenever you have time, I'd love a comment or review
Hi-ya! If you have the time, would you mind reviewing my main story, Sunshine Fog? I'll link you the first chapter! If you want, you can review one of my poems or a short story for something not as long. : )
When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind. — Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind
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