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Will Review For Food
too late
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Points: 3050
Reviews: 174
Thu Apr 23, 2020 5:52 pm
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JesseWrites
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Nope, too late.
Last edited by
JesseWrites
on Sat Jun 20, 2020 12:03 am, edited 4 times in total.
“My thoughts are stars I cannot fathom into constellations.”
― John Green,
The Fault in Our Stars
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Points: 36
Reviews: 4
Mon Apr 27, 2020 3:38 am
Hanuli
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Hello! I would love to have the first chapter of my novel reviewed.
ennui - 01
Summary: the story of a man who forgot his name and his imaginary friend John.
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Points: 3050
Reviews: 174
Mon Apr 27, 2020 3:41 am
JesseWrites
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I'm on it!
“My thoughts are stars I cannot fathom into constellations.”
― John Green,
The Fault in Our Stars
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Points: 18564
Reviews: 278
Tue Apr 28, 2020 1:26 pm
LittleLee
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Could you review my fantasy novel? Here's a link to the Prologue:
New Prologue to my book
There's no need to review the prologue itself, it has plenty, but I need reviews for the following chapters!
"I believe a man does what he can until his destiny is revealed to him."
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Points: 22
Reviews: 365
Fri May 01, 2020 5:23 am
Fishr
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Hello!
With all the wonderful feedback, these keep getting serious overhauls with editing. I need opinions please! And thank you!
Mon Amour (Part I)
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Points: 3050
Reviews: 174
Fri May 01, 2020 12:59 pm
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LittleLee
JesseWrites
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@LittleLee
I'll get to it as soon as possible!
“My thoughts are stars I cannot fathom into constellations.”
― John Green,
The Fault in Our Stars
Gender:
Points: 18564
Reviews: 278
Fri May 01, 2020 2:16 pm
LittleLee
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Thanks!
"I believe a man does what he can until his destiny is revealed to him."
Gender:
Points: 164
Reviews: 33
Tue May 05, 2020 10:08 pm
DeliriumNervosa
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Hi Jesse,
I would love a review on my piece Path to Diagnosis Part One. It is about the struggle to get a medical diagnosis for a very rare condition.
Hopefully you get a chance to read it. There is a part two coming.
-Delirium
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