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Mon Jan 09, 2023 9:47 am
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Mikatsune says...



Please do read my short story: (The AI War)

Title: The AI War

Genre: Science fiction, Tech


Intro: It's about a boy called Kai who goes to history lesson and learns some things he didn't want to know.



I'm sorry, I'm not good at Intros.
  





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Mon Feb 06, 2023 5:53 am
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KocoCoko says...



Hiya there! I'm a baby member basically haha, so um, here' s the first chapter to a little project I plan on writing.

- Wakefield, Wyoming. 1941.

- Supernatural, slight mystery, sort of a dark comedy, and also slice of life/found family(??)

- Wakefield, Wyoming is a strange town, and Frank Williamson and his new housekeeper, Lucinda, might just be a bit stranger.

- https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/KocoCoko/Wakefield-Wyoming-1941-154789

- Anything in particular that you want me to make note of:
-- Violence and/or Horror. Nothing crazy, but it gets a bit bloody.

-- I'd really love any comments about the characters, since they're the driving force of the story and the narrative is more focused on the people and relationships than some of the events going on (dont worry, those are still important, though.)
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"You're wrong about humanity. They are your greatest creation because they're better than you are. Sure, they're weak, and they cheat and steal and destroy and disappoint, but they also give and create, and they sing and dance and love. Above all, they never give up."
— Metatron