Hey! Could you maybe check out one or two of my extracts/ short stories? They're not fully polished yet, but would like some advice on characters and how to improve my writing One Quiet Moment Knights of Alexander Love
Hi @humblebard1, I'll probably get to reviewing your works between this weekend and the next! Those will be the last review requests I take for a while since my uni semester is starting up soon.
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge
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