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Wed Jan 24, 2024 8:35 am
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Liminality says...



Okie dokie @herbalhour I've done the review!
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Wed Jan 24, 2024 11:42 am
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herbalhour says...



thank you lim :D

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treading through abyss (novel)
  





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Sat Jan 27, 2024 10:10 am
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Liminality says...



@GengarIsBestBoy Your review has been delivered! :D
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Sun Jan 28, 2024 8:09 am
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Liminality says...



@AmayaStatham I've reviewed your poem! :D
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Sun Jan 28, 2024 2:56 pm
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AmayaStatham says...



Thank you so much <333 I needed all that critique!
  





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Mon Jan 29, 2024 7:05 pm
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humblebard1 says...



Hey! Could you maybe check out one or two of my extracts/ short stories? They're not fully polished yet, but would like some advice on characters and how to improve my writing :D
One Quiet Moment
Knights of Alexander
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Mon Jan 29, 2024 8:03 pm
Liminality says...



@humblebard1 Sure, I can have a look at a couple of those sometime this week or next!
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Mon Jan 29, 2024 8:40 pm
humblebard1 says...



Amazing, thank you so much!
  





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Fri Feb 02, 2024 10:02 am
Liminality says...



Hi @humblebard1, I'll probably get to reviewing your works between this weekend and the next! :D Those will be the last review requests I take for a while since my uni semester is starting up soon.
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Fri Feb 02, 2024 2:22 pm
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Awesome, thanks! Good luck at uni :D
  








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