I have way too much free time this summer, so send me your prose pieces (short stories are preferred, but I'll check out anything non-poetry) and I'll give them a solid, helpful critique.
Cheers!
"So the writer who breeds more words than he needs, is making a chore for the reader who reads." — Dr. Seuss
Hello there I just uploaded an alternative beginning for my novel. It's really not long, just the first draft. Any suggestions are more than welcome. I would appreciate it if you could take a look.
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge
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